Ravengloome

I use this site quite abit, and stalk the forums every once and awhile. I was wondering if I could get some Critiques On a piece I've been working on (in Tuxguitar, so ill include the midi file as well for those of you that don't use Tux)

Influences: Mitochondrion, Portal, Antediluvian, umm Noisy Death and Black metal basically.

The songwriting is almost entirely linear, and I am on the fence Some days I like the direction it headed and other days I think its missing something (other then the fact its missing drums in a large portion of it)

Well tell me what you guys think.

Attached Files

Song1-Derp8-epic.mid (95.6 KB, 41 views)

Ometh

It would be cool if you shared a GP file too: I like to see what I hear

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Jacques-Henri

This, you can export into GP files in Tuxguitar.