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UG's Evan Tanner
Join Date: Feb 2009
Location: Topsfield, Maine
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Reckless Girl
Once again I find myself unable to write a cheerful song, even though I was in a moderately good mood while writing this one hahaha. I think this is some of my best (Unfinished) work...
I brought that reckless girl home to mama last night She hasn't spoke to me for days Disdain’s been coursing through her blood As she tries to hide those “battle scars” The red sun rose up through the trees The sailors and the lovers all pray for the rain Humans being human with their changing ways I’ve got wounds too babe cleverly concealed as veins Buying books just to buy the time to read But nobodies got any time to spare Rescued that reckless girl from the rolling of the wheel The torpid heartache of a slip of the blade Pointless irreverence in the words I wrote Cynical denial of what’s truth At one time no need to worry I Thought I had it all composed Disillusioned memoirs when you called my name Screaming all the words I was afraid to see Fighting back the tears that should have never be As she tears at the stitches once again Watched that reckless girl add a chapter to the tragedy In the sad comedic story known as life Paralyzed from all the times she’s crushed this soul These cries have been carved into these talking walls The days drag on but the years fly by Keeping me wondering how to live Here’s to the rainy days that never clear off That's all I got so far. Thoughts, opinions, ideas?
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"I will do nothing lightly. When I walk, I will walk heavily. When I fight, I will fight with conviction. When I feel, I will feel everything. When I love, I will love with everything." R.I.P Evan Tanner |
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Banned
Join Date: May 2009
Location: The London Borough of Croydon, GB
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It's okay, I guess.
The first verse started okay. |
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