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Old 01-23-2013, 03:44 PM   #1
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Writing of the Week - to feel small (OTS)

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to dream & then
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Old 01-23-2013, 03:51 PM   #2
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this was perfect.
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Old 01-23-2013, 05:15 PM   #3
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for an ots, 10/10
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Old 01-24-2013, 11:37 PM   #4
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For 6 words you sure did a hell of a lot.
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Old 01-25-2013, 12:20 AM   #5
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For 6 words you sure did a hell of a lot.


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Old 01-25-2013, 04:18 AM   #6
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wow, thanks you guys <3
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Old 01-25-2013, 05:00 AM   #7
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These words are felt rather than read. Good job man.
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Old 01-25-2013, 07:09 AM   #8
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This is really good! I also really enjoyed 'and yet we broke'.
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Old 01-26-2013, 06:58 PM   #9
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Not too sure about this one. Just seems very pretentious to me.
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Old 01-28-2013, 12:52 AM   #10
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Welcome. Please stick around.
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Old 01-29-2013, 02:27 PM   #11
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Welcome to the forum. Enjoy winning Writing of the Week. This was excellent.
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Old 01-29-2013, 02:58 PM   #12
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I can't even.. thank you guys so much
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Old 01-29-2013, 04:17 PM   #13
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Yeah Jaybearch. This was really great Almost haiku like in the presentation of it.
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Old 01-30-2013, 08:27 PM   #14
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Not too sure about this one. Just seems very pretentious to me.

Pretentious as in, it's pretending that it knows what it's doing when it's not, or pretentious as in you don't know what it means?






Congrats on WotW, by the way!
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Old 02-05-2013, 12:43 PM   #15
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Although I'm unsticking this thread, you should 'stick' around. Geddit?!
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