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Old 01-31-2013, 03:13 AM   #1
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gallows

Oh, it is just like us to swing from the gallows.
Never matching each otherís rhythm,
Never finding unison.
In death, I am mocked for things I could never be in life.

Itís as becoming as the bag over your head.
Itís as fitting as the noose around my neck.

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Old 01-31-2013, 03:27 AM   #2
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This deserves a round of applause.

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Old 02-05-2013, 12:19 AM   #3
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Oh, forgot about this. Anything to critique?


Something feels....slightly clumsy about the middle.

To me, at least.
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