02-07-2013, 05:46 PM
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Join Date: Dec 2008
Location: 'Merica
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My Only Regret
I saw you sleeping
That cold December night You looked so peaceful Didn't want to cause you fright My only regret, is that I didn't pat your head My only regret, that I didn't sit beside your bed My only regret, that our last conversation was a fight My only regret, I didn't give you one last kiss goodnight
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02-08-2013, 03:40 PM
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Join Date: Feb 2009
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Right on. A few more verses, and you'd have a murder ballad.
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02-10-2013, 01:55 PM
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Join Date: Feb 2013
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I agree with Nilchii. This looks like a good piece in the making
 Would love to see it expanded a bit...looking forward to it |
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