King Twili

As the title says, this is a work in progress - as such, a lot of the percussion is placeholder, in addition to the section at 8:12. So yeah, had some time and inspiration to get this recorded over the past few days, would be nice to get some thoughts on it.

http://soundcloud.com/aaron-stone/t...-of-icarus-demo

Mixing is minimal at this stage, this is literally just a demo as it stands.

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elementwood89

I like the guitar in the intro, very chill. I know you said the percussion is just temporary, but the drum track has too much reverb for my taste (it almost kind of distracts). Aside from that, I think you should definately keep working on it. Are you gonna try adding vocals? Just curious what they'd be like. I think it'd make a cool instrumental as well, just kind of long.

Good luck with it, I'll have to check it out if you do more work.