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Old 02-16-2013, 04:33 PM   #1
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New Progressive Doom/Stoner metal song! C4C!

Hi guys! My band "Löffelmannschaft" just finished our new song "Into the forest of divinations". I wrote and played everything exept the drums.
https://soundcloud.com/loffelmannsc...-of-divinations
Please give me some constructive gritisism. You can post your own song too, and i'll listen and review it!
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Original fusion metal song:
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ORIGINAL PROGRESSIVE METAL SONG:
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Old 02-16-2013, 04:50 PM   #2
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Nice man! I really dig the guitars my only complaint are the vocals, they just seem a little 'off' to me but i dont know how to explain it. Maybe a little out of key. Enjoy the guitar tone and the drums sound nice too. good production

c4c: http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1588282
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Old 02-16-2013, 06:14 PM   #3
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The transition from the intro to the main riff is awesome, and that riff is crushing man! Iommi would be proud of that one. I really like the vocals, they're kinda gravelly and fit well with the vibe of the riffs. Sometimes I think they're a bit quiet, like when you get to the end of a line they can fade off a bit, maybe a bit of compression could fix this. The lead part at 2:00 is a great change up form the slamming riffs.

The structure of the track is really good too, you know exactly when to change things up, like the bass break at 4:35, and when to keep chugging forwards. Coming back to the main riff at the end is a nice touch. I'm really struggling to come up with any criticisms man, haha the solos are very well done too.

The production is spot on, guitar tone is huge and drums are nice and natural sounding, although maybe the snare could cut through a bit more. Overall you should be really proud of this, I would pay money for an album of this quality.

C4C http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...59#post31064659
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Old 02-17-2013, 06:28 PM   #4
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very catchy little tune, it has quite an evil sound to it at the beginning. not a big fan of the vocals as i dont usually listen to this type of music. the drums and fret-muting were my favorite part though, aswell as the original melody, as its pretty catchy. also liked the bass solo around 4:30, good stuff!

c4c my song? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1588042
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Old 02-17-2013, 07:01 PM   #5
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very catchy little tune, it has quite an evil sound to it at the beginning. not a big fan of the vocals as i dont usually listen to this type of music. the drums and fret-muting were my favorite part though, aswell as the original melody, as its pretty catchy. also liked the bass solo around 4:30, good stuff!

c4c my song? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1588042

Commented on your guys links. Whapart do you mean by the drums and frett mute part? What is fret mute?
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Original fusion metal song:
http://m.soundcloud.com/kjartan-thorkildsen/euphoric
ORIGINAL PROGRESSIVE METAL SONG:
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Old 02-18-2013, 12:42 AM   #6
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Audio quality is quite good. Instrumentally everything sounds very good (I got a kick out of them)! Vocals are pretty good during the verse, OK (but not as good) during the chorus & bridge. The playing is tight. Nice lead guitar. Maybe fret mute is palm muting. Please review my music at this link:

http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1586943
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Old 02-21-2013, 01:51 AM   #7
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Oh thank you for actually enjoying the vocals to a degree! The first song had really horrible vocals and everybody told me to stop singing, but its cool that this had ok vox. Its hard to find a singer here. I live in a small town in the middle of norway/ nowhere. :P
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