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Old 02-16-2013, 08:57 PM   #1
Pyrotechie
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Mary Jane (Original)(Home Demo)(C4C)

Hi, I'm jay. I write shit.

The original rhythm guitar for this was made years ago as a gag with british-sounding lyrics. I remembered it a few days ago and decided to try and make a full song out of it for kicks, tell me what ya think.

http://soundcloud.com/jonathan-wade...nefinal-mixdown

Everything is done by me, drums are made on a drum machine. Also, try and ignore the crappy mixing/mastering, I know I suck at it lol. Just wanted to get the basic idea across.

Leave a comment and I'll be sure to check out some of your work as well! Feel free to check out the studio-recorded song as well, if interested.
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Old 02-18-2013, 01:09 AM   #2
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Pyro,
Vocals sound good (just a few spots sound slightly pitchy). Melodies are good. Instrumentally, everything sounds good, playing is pretty tight. The ending was a surprise, somewhat abrupt, but not bad. Good song. Please review my music at this link:

http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1586943
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Old 02-18-2013, 07:03 PM   #3
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I really like the rhythm of the song in general and the vocals fit in very well. love the ending with the new parts added in. Great mix and overall I liked the song. great job
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Old 02-18-2013, 09:25 PM   #4
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Nice job man! Like aaron said there were a few spots that were pitchy vocally but overall was good, and your playing was cool too. Great work!!!

C4C: http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1588282
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