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Old 02-27-2013, 01:36 AM   #1
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Currently writing a theme analysis paper on Macbeth for my English class. just looking for somebody with a gmail account who is a decent writer. also, if you have macbeth that would be a plus.

thanks pit.... (hopefully)

also, ill delete this thread if i can find some help tonight.

give me writing advice. please.
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Old 02-27-2013, 01:40 AM   #2
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Old 02-27-2013, 01:43 AM   #3
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First writing tip "Help"

probably wasnt the best idea to use the worst grammar spelling i have while asking for help on an english assignment. mostly looking for tips on structuring and general editing tho...
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Old 02-27-2013, 01:45 AM   #4
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Probably wasn't the best idea to use the worst grammar and spelling I have while asking for help on an English assignment. Mostly looking for tips on structuring and general editing though...


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The OP is confusing. It sounds like you're trying to get someone else to do your homework for you. Writing tip #2: Be direct.
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Old 02-27-2013, 01:46 AM   #6
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i really wouldnt bother the pit with this, but desperate times and so on....
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Old 02-27-2013, 01:47 AM   #7
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The OP is confusing. It sounds like you're trying to get someone else to do your homework for you. Writing tip #2: Be direct.

i write my own shit. i was really just hoping to find an english major to give me some protips.
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Old 02-27-2013, 01:50 AM   #8
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I'm assuming this is a high school English class? Yeah, you could pretty much roll your paper in a cylinder and insert it about your person and pass.
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I'm assuming this is a high school English class? Yeah, you could pretty much roll your paper in a cylinder and insert it about your person and pass.

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I'm assuming this is a high school English class? Yeah, you could pretty much roll your paper in a cylinder and insert it about your person and pass.

i wouldnt enjoy that personally, but thats probably how i will end up turning the paper to my english teacher.
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Old 02-27-2013, 02:23 AM   #12
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Theme: Incest
Premise: Still taboo in modern day society so theme is just as relevant today as back then
Main body: Why
Conclusion

or

Theme: Witchcraft
Premise: Totally not taboo anymore which makes story have less of an impact
Main body: Why, support
Conclusion

I don't know, its been a long time since i've read Macbeth but these are the general themes I think. And a basic outline for how to structure report.
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Old 02-27-2013, 02:27 AM   #13
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Theme: Incest
Premise: Still taboo in modern day society so theme is just as relevant today as back then
Main body: Why
Conclusion

or

Theme: Witchcraft
Premise: Totally not taboo anymore which makes story have less of an impact
Main body: Why, support
Conclusion

I don't know, its been a long time since i've read Macbeth but these are the general themes I think. And a basic outline for how to structure report.

Macbeth is the one about the guy who hears his future from three witches so him and his wife go on a killing spree so he can become the king of scotland.

i believe your thinking of the book the scarlet letter. or the movie easy a
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Old 02-27-2013, 02:40 AM   #14
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I'm an English major, just graduated from one of the highest ranking unis last year. I'm gonna need your credit card information before I do anything else
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I'm an English major, just graduated from one of the highest ranking unis last year. I'm gonna need your credit card information before I do anything else

I'm also an English major. I'm taking Shakespeare next semester so I'll need money to fund a time machine.
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I'm also an English major. I'm taking Shakespeare next semester so I'll need money to fund a time machine.

how about ill give you my undying gratitude. im broke.
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how about ill give you my undying gratitude. im broke.

I need a time machine, bro.



Seriously, I'm undereducated on Shakespeare.
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Seriously, I'm undereducated on Shakespeare.

this is the closest thing i can offer you to a time machine.
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Macbeth is the one about the guy who hears his future from three witches so him and his wife go on a killing spree so he can become the king of scotland.

i believe your thinking of the book the scarlet letter. or the movie easy a


Oops, yeah I melded the one where the dude sleeps with his mum and that one together. Not Othello, I forget the the other one, maybe it was Hamlet.



Shakespeare loved taboo topics, maybe write about that and how that's how he still catches a readers interest using those tools.
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