Dean Washburn

The murder of a tree
A thought unforeseen

Hacking at the base
Ready to embrace
A lifeless corpse
Struck without remorse

The innocent trunk
Butchered in chunks

Bagging it's Remains
A Sick and Twisted game
Shipping Dead wood
To your local neighborhood

Sitting by the fire
Will Fume an attire

The Burning Heat
As wood and Flames meet
A sense of peace
It's comfortably neat

Death in a rubble Sack
The joy's of a pyromaniac



It's a Poem rather than a lyric or 'songwriting' however I want to share to help some people get some inspiration when it comes to writing.


The title was very hard to come up with, I figured 'Tree Killer' wasn't much of an eye-catcher

Eccer

It's a nice little piece you got here, though I would consider revising it. To see if whether there is anything you would like to change

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Dean Washburn

Cheers, I understand what you mean, the first two are lacking. I'll see what I can conjure up and re-edit when done.

Thanks for the feedback

a2sas2in

Dont alwas try to rhyme. Simply the rhythm and sound (not like a rhyme, but the fit each other) of some words are good together. Or just use big/clever words ;P that always works