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Old 03-02-2013, 07:29 AM   #1
Jordan89R
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repet it if

Thousands of people
Pile in
Making their way, taken their way

You're so smart, it kills me
I'm excited by the bustle
And dangerous tides

Highways lead to cities
Guided by headlights
Driving and driving
Like lava, flowing on manmade rock

Tired and hungry, I'm thirsty for money

Does the trip end when I say?
Cities and cities and miles away

I love it when I rhyme by mistake
I hate it as well, I hate what you sell

I'm tired
Take me home
You can sleep me away
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Old 03-03-2013, 04:06 PM   #2
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Hm, I liked this piece. Simply because of the short lines, you managed to create something that's vast on the image front, and It didn't feel to contrived at all And I like the sence of humour in it as well ^^

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Old 03-08-2013, 09:03 PM   #3
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Thank you, sir. I appreciate the kind words. I will try and return the favor by visiting that link in your sig and posting a reply.
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Old 03-11-2013, 10:43 PM   #4
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Thanks for taking a look Check out steven wilson's "drive home" I kinda got that same vibe for this. Even though the lyric context is a little bit different. Keep writing dude
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