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Old 03-05-2013, 09:29 PM   #1
JakePlaysGuitar
"Diggin' the blues"
 
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Earthbound (wip) C4C!!

Working on a slow jm style song, would love to hear some opinions, I do crit for crit btw

Verse:
Tell me now
What have you found
A solitary moment
To which we are bound
For in this moment
You saw the light
Now spread your loving wings
And take to your flight
But it'll be a while For me
And my lonely fear of heights

Chorus:
And I've suddenly found
My heart's got me earthbound
And my love
Can't seem to find it's way back to you

Thanks so much guys!!
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Old 03-06-2013, 01:26 PM   #2
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Solid. Don't really have a lot of crit for it, unfortunately.
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Old 03-06-2013, 08:00 PM   #3
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"Diggin' the blues"
 
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Really? I'm sort of on the fence about this song lol.
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