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Old 03-14-2013, 01:56 AM   #1
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Black Lung (I will critique other songs soon)

Black lung

Please don't hate me
Just because
I smoke cigarettes
They feel good
In my black lung
In my black lungs
Before you judge me
Please realize
I'm like you
But I only have
Black lungs

I know you hate the smell
I know it pisses you off
But when it comes to your taxes
And dirty looks
And disapproval
It just makes me shrug
And wonder why
In this time and age
Even when I just smoke outside
You look down on me
This is my life
Not yours
I still smoke cigarettes

I still smoke cigarettes
I still smoke cigarettes
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Old 03-15-2013, 05:37 PM   #2
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i too have trouble with close minded people.
Making your day worse so tomorrow seems better.
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