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Old 04-06-2013, 12:50 AM   #1
PatDillon5515
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first batch of melodeth/thrash songs

hey guys I was hoping for some feedback on this batch of lyrics. i am the main song writer for my band and was wondering what you think, thanks.

Malignity
It's a cold day
Was a cold night
I'm still alive
What surprise
There's the lakefront
In my hand
But there aint no water
Just a reflection
Of a dead man
Is it a nightmare
Is it a dream
No, it's just
My reality
Can 't accept it
Won't believe
They didn't bother
Tryin to save me
Fallen angel
Beckons to me
I smile and say
Let me
burn in peace
You wouldn't save me
Let me just bite the scythe
You wouldn't save me
Let me finally bite the scythe
You wouldn't save me
I'm gunna taste that scythe
You wouldn't save me
Just let me bite the scythe

Village Of The Black Hearts pt. 1
Blind I see the abyss
Where the hate
Eternally lies
Mine is ignited
With a kiss
Dead I walk
To the dwelling
That beckons me
The town of dread
The nightmare in my head
Night's eclipse fills my eyes
Hopeless souls slowly wisp by
So cold I feel inside
Horseman of Death
Rides by my side
Village of no return
The moon freezes my mind
Demons bite my flesh
All my dreams in vain
No
Jet black
Fog leads my path
Terror spins down my spine
Creeping with a chill
Bloods splatters my back
Destiny fulfilled
Silver tears they pour
Freezing like the moon
Poltergeist don't mourn
Laughing at my doom
Aaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Village of the black hearts
Tormenting my soul
Gore dyes the fog
Pouring down the path
Hellspawn to be
Growing in my heart
In my heart

Village Of The Black Hearts pt.2
As one....
The forest soothes The pain
And fear Of my life
Shaking I see pieces Of my Soul
Float like embers in The wind
As I walk The embers burn Away
The trees Are red and their leaves The same
How can this be
How could this happen to me
Black dead cold
The hate churns and grows
Red a lonely Soul
My heart Beats alone
Broken here they Lie
In this valley Of The dead
People Of The town
The nightmare in my head
Black hearts
Dead flames
...they're still burning
Black dead cold
The hate churns and grows
Red a lonely Soul
My heart Beats alone
Black dead cold
The hate churns and grows
Red a lonely Soul
My heart Beats alone

Hellspawn
In my heart there burns a fire
But it surely stings cold of ice
All I see are all regrets
The pain of knowing that all is lost
My temple built by hate
Chained is my very fate
My own fire burns
The foundation of my soul...ice cold
Are these shadows that surround me
The prophets of my boundaries
Or the makers of a hellspawn to be
All my fears are amplified
By the chains that crucified
The hopes and dreams
Of a monster like me
Am I born to die
A child of Babylon
The city of my soul
And it burns just the same
Are these shadows that surround me
The prophets of my boundaries
Or the makers of a hellspawn to be
Hellfire
By the Hellspawn
Hellion
Are these shadows that surround me
The prophets of my boundaries
Or the makers of a hellspawn to be

Forevermore
Pitch black under the moon lit sky
I wait cold and frayed
Knowing a part of me has died
I feel his ghost watching the hate grow in my eyes
All I was, was a candle left to burn
A light so small the light Flickered out
I feel the light leaving
As the wrath inside twists and turns
All that I wanted
Has surely burnt out
Hear my spirit crying
As my soul begins to shout
A cold wind pierces my skin
I feel my soul leaving my body
All my dreams gone with that little flame
Leaving my soulless ghost dying
All that I wanted
Has surely burnt out
Hear my spirit crying
As my soul begins to shout
Forevermore!
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