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Old 05-05-2013, 04:27 PM   #1
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gone fishing

a woman of water splashed, airless, turbid in the river.

eel kinked its tail
question mark like
broadsheet black,
it dragged her out
and punctuated.

she gasped fish
she trembled anguish.

insulted, eel rasped person:

"sticking hooks in their mouths doesn't hurt them?"

parched, she wept and breathed children

astonished, eel did nothing.

Last edited by doubtfulsalmon : 05-06-2013 at 12:35 PM.
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Old 05-05-2013, 06:01 PM   #2
mon titre d'utilisateur
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its* possibly.

I like this.

"Success is as dangerous as failure. Hope is as hollow as fear." - from Tao Te Ching
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Old 05-06-2013, 12:34 PM   #3
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oops, yeah it should be, i'll fix that.

thanks for taking a look
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