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Old 05-20-2013, 08:31 PM   #1
ChrisHiggs
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Cruel Temptress (C4C)

Hi people, just finished recording a song on my phone using Garageband.

Would appreciate a listen and some feedback. Will C4C!

https://soundcloud.com/#christopher...cruel-temptress

If you like it, give it a like or a share. I will do the same for you.

Thanks!

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Old 05-23-2013, 06:52 AM   #2
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Hey thanks for the crit, I tried to come here to return the favour but the link won't actually take me there. Just to the general soundcloud homestream thing :/
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Old 05-23-2013, 09:12 AM   #3
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Hey thanks for the crit, I tried to come here to return the favour but the link won't actually take me there. Just to the general soundcloud homestream thing :/


Ah, probably why I've had no comments!

Umm, I have changed the link and it takes me there fine, even when I'm not logged in.

Failing this, here is my profile link: https://soundcloud.com/#christopher...cruel-temptress

And if all else fails, just search ChristopherJamesHiggs on Soundcloud. No idea why it shouldn't work though.

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Old 05-23-2013, 02:00 PM   #4
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The link works fine
The lead guitar and bass lines were tasty. I thought the vocals had too much reverb and dominated the mix a little too much. The drums sounded a bit weak. I liked the vibe of the song but I think it needed some dynamic to differentiate between parts.
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Old 05-24-2013, 07:52 AM   #5
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Link for some reason still wasn't working for me, but found you

Ok I like the guitars (the solo was also really good), I think the guitars AND the vocals had a bit too much reverb. I couldn't make out much of the lyrics but I like the singing (and the ending thing was a nice touch). I think the chorus could use some work though, it varies little from the verses and I think the song could use a bit more of a dynamic between the two. Still, a good song and well recorded
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