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Old 07-15-2013, 10:08 AM   #1
IronMark666
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New post-rock-ish song (C4C)

Just finished this, it's kinda got a vague post-rock aesthetic but with chaos and heaviness intermittently joining in. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated and returned. Thanks.

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Old 07-15-2013, 12:03 PM   #2
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Great job with mixing the gunshots with the guitar line.. I love the guitar line, its dark and moody. Overall, its a real nice tune. Something that could be done is adding one note or two with the intro guitar lines to add some variations. The solo-ish thing towards the ends is the best part of the song. I like love how the song ends, I'm a sucker for songs that build up slowly and ends well ! ]

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https://soundcloud.com/radio-paradise/anticipation
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Old 07-15-2013, 04:13 PM   #3
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Great job with mixing the gunshots with the guitar line.. I love the guitar line, its dark and moody. Overall, its a real nice tune. Something that could be done is adding one note or two with the intro guitar lines to add some variations. The solo-ish thing towards the ends is the best part of the song. I like love how the song ends, I'm a sucker for songs that build up slowly and ends well ! ]

PS: Could you review my 1 take instrumental here? :
https://soundcloud.com/radio-paradise/anticipation


Thanks for the comments man, I'll leave feedback for yours on SC.
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Old 07-16-2013, 12:24 AM   #4
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Interesting intro/sound effects throughout. I was hoping for some good vocals. Drums are different, which is good. I like the lead guitar at 4:50. This would be good for background music/effects on a film or TV show. Please review my music at this link:

http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1609249
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Old 07-18-2013, 08:38 PM   #5
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Love the Morse Code intro. Lead in is a bit long. I kept expecting it to get to the point. It did finally. I would shorten the intro. Maybe cut it in half then get to the driving guitar riff. I like the riff alot. Nice guitar playing. I could see this as the background music in a movie. Well done overall.

Would you take a listen to "The Dance"

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Old 07-19-2013, 05:21 PM   #6
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Some cool ideas, especially with the production, and the harmony guitars. Overall though I feel like it just seems like a vague outline of a song. So much more could be going on, or least could venture into a few other directions, or at least added other musical layers. The song is more about the effects itself, takes about a minute and a half before any instruments even kick in.
The riff is cool though, and it was definitely well recorded. Overall I think it has a lot of potential.

C4C? - http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1609992
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