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Old 08-08-2013, 11:31 PM   #1
rushmore
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Unmadness

how am i not yet
the sea? in polka dot
oyster tie, through
motionmotion & french
pressed cumulus(it is
dizzying, out here onthe
peninsula. careening
sails pitch vessels to
the sad, hungry blue(ing)
whales
(& yolk undrift,
though filled with
yarns of yearning an
omnipotent kitten
fuddles around
with, messy-ing the
fabric of madness,
leaving me with
whatever
this-
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Old 08-09-2013, 05:01 PM   #2
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Your poetry leaves me without words. This is so amazing.
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Old 08-11-2013, 12:43 AM   #3
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Your words are beyond appreciated.
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