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Old 09-25-2013, 11:58 AM   #1
EvilorDivine68
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A Place Where You Can Breathe

Can I lift you up?
Can I remove the shadows pouring the acid rain?
Acid pain, when trust fades away
Leavin’ you to believe we’re all the same

I don’t wanna be the one reinforcing the bitter lies,
The sea of tears flowin’ through your eyes
Can I heal your wounds and watch a new dawn arise
That sets your soul in bloom

Hesitant, so resistant
Don’t wanna walk into a heartbreak phenomenon
But I reassure you there’s nothing more
That I would rather do than treat you with a cure

Let me wash away your sorrow, replacing your regrets
With utopian days you won’t ever forget
In pursuit of tomorrow; reach out for these honest hands
Deep into the unknown

Darkness overcome by light
Unconditioned love within our sight
Transcend the galaxies, to a place where it’s all right
A place where you can breathe

And I know, I know you’ve heard it all before
Is this solely for myself or what you’re truly looking for?
And I know, this is a trial I will fight to endure
For your eternal harmony, forevermore
Forevermore
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Old 10-03-2013, 12:27 PM   #2
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Wow. That is really good. Great job.
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Old 10-10-2013, 01:37 AM   #3
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This is touching. A good piece. Has a mixture of emotion and visuals. Very good. 4.5/5 COuld you take a look at mine and see what you think. THe Pale and Bleed For Me.
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