|09-25-2013, 11:58 AM||#1|
Join Date: Jan 2008
A Place Where You Can Breathe
Can I lift you up?
Can I remove the shadows pouring the acid rain?
Acid pain, when trust fades away
Leavin’ you to believe we’re all the same
I don’t wanna be the one reinforcing the bitter lies,
The sea of tears flowin’ through your eyes
Can I heal your wounds and watch a new dawn arise
That sets your soul in bloom
Hesitant, so resistant
Don’t wanna walk into a heartbreak phenomenon
But I reassure you there’s nothing more
That I would rather do than treat you with a cure
Let me wash away your sorrow, replacing your regrets
With utopian days you won’t ever forget
In pursuit of tomorrow; reach out for these honest hands
Deep into the unknown
Darkness overcome by light
Unconditioned love within our sight
Transcend the galaxies, to a place where it’s all right
A place where you can breathe
And I know, I know you’ve heard it all before
Is this solely for myself or what you’re truly looking for?
And I know, this is a trial I will fight to endure
For your eternal harmony, forevermore
|10-03-2013, 12:27 PM||#2|
Join Date: Jul 2013
Location: Newberg, Oregon.
Wow. That is really good. Great job.
They say when you talk to God it's prayer, but when God talks to you it's schizophrenia.
|10-10-2013, 01:37 AM||#3|
Join Date: Oct 2013
This is touching. A good piece. Has a mixture of emotion and visuals. Very good. 4.5/5 COuld you take a look at mine and see what you think. THe Pale and Bleed For Me.