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Old 10-06-2013, 08:12 AM   #1
seventh_angel
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Tiny Cycle

I felt nothing
until I felt worried because I felt nothing.
Then, I worry over nothing
until I realize there’s nothing to worry about.
And now, I'll stop worrying
until there’s nothing left to feel.

In infinitum
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Old 10-07-2013, 03:20 AM   #2
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Haiku indeed
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Old 10-08-2013, 03:58 PM   #3
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This is an example of something I feel if I were to critique I would possibly come across as something more vicious than I am. Instead I'll borrow but modify a slightly well-worn expression, in that it was adequate for what it is, but what it is is nothing much at all. Like if boxes of matches were buy one get one free at the supermarket.
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Old 10-08-2013, 03:59 PM   #4
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I have a vague recollection I might have slammed another of your recent pieces. It's nothing personal, I promise. Just the way the wind blows.
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