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Old 12-21-2013, 10:06 PM   #1
ChemicalFire
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Unfinished Melodic Death Metal [WIP/C4C/GP5/MIDI]

Not something I write much of, but I was playing around with a diminished scale and come up with something I liked (even if it's a little generic.) Would really appreciate some feedback from some of the Metal guys as I've not written any Death Metal in years!

Will C4C if you link me to something to C4C!
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Old 12-22-2013, 07:33 PM   #2
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Omg that snare, it trully rapes your ears.
Intro riff is catchy but I don't really like the drums. The drum fills at 9-10 aren't very exciting but I dig the next riff. The riff at 19 would sound better with a blast beat behind it, would give it a bit more punch. Just be shure to make it kick-snare-kick-snare, with the cymbal hits matching the kicks, but that's just my recommendation. Repetition of the previous riff, is aight. I dig the next riff, sounds groovy and catchy. The next following riffs are repetitions of previous riffs, not much to say here but I do feel that the song is starting to get a bit repetitive. I'd introduce a couple new riffs and maybe use a lower tuning.
Also I kinda have an idea for a solo thing, will post it in a few minutes.
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Old 12-23-2013, 10:28 AM   #3
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Feel you on the repetition, like I said it's a work in progress and I just wanted to see if I was heading in the right directing seeing as it's so long since I've writing anything but Misery Signals worship xD

That solo sounds pretty badass too Ometh, I may have to steal it...
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Old 12-23-2013, 10:29 AM   #4
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That solo sounds pretty badass too Ometh, I may have to steal it...

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