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Old 03-15-2014, 03:42 AM   #1
cjb2293
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Original Recording: Fibers

Hey everyone,

Me and my friend recorded my new song "Fibers" that I plan to release soon. Can you please give it a listen to let me know how I can better the recording?

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Old 03-15-2014, 01:20 PM   #2
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Hi,

I like your rhythm tone in the beginning of the track. When your vocals come in, I think the first note is a bit off.

It could be the speakers I'm using, but the vocals in mix dont come through clearly.

Very nice vibe to the track overall - great classic rock acoustic set you've got going on. A very very cool track I'd chill to - I love your rhythm hooks.

Great track overall, not much to improve really - just the vocals need to come through better.

Check out my track at - http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru....php?p=32445288

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Old 03-19-2014, 11:27 AM   #3
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Awesome I'll definitely double check those things. Thank you for the feedback... going to check out your track now!
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Old 03-19-2014, 11:20 PM   #4
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cjb,
Sometimes the vocals sound pretty good, sometimes a bit pitchy. I'm fine with the vocal mix. I like the guitar riffs & playing. The song itself is good! Perhaps you could review my music at this link:

http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...03#post32454503
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