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Old 11-04-2005, 12:31 AM   #1
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Intro: Bass: g:9---9---9--------------------------- d:--7---9---7-9-7--------------------- a:------------------------------------ e:------------------------------------ Rythem Guitar Hops In: E(x4) Bass: g:9---9---9---9----------------------- d:--7---7---7---7--------------------- a:------------------------------------ e:------------------------------------ Am(x4) Bass: g:------------------------------------ d:7-9-7-9----------------------------- a:------------------------------------ e:------------------------------------ C#(x2) g:9---9------------------------------- d:--9---9----------------------------- a:------------------------------------ e:------------------------------------ !~~--------GUITAR 1 RIFFS--------~~! Verse: E Am Bm e:------------------|------------------|------------------ b:--7----5----------|------------------|------------------ g:9---7-------------|--5---------------|----7------------- d:------------------|7---5-5-9---------|-9----7-7-9------- a:------------------|------------------|------------------ e:------------------|------------------|------------------ Chorus: E Am Bm C# e:------------------|------------------|------------------|-------------------- b:----7-5-7-5-------|------------------|------------------|-------------------- g:--4---------------|------------------|------------------|-------------------- d:2-----------------|------------------|---6-9------------|11----9-8-9-8-6----- a:------------------|---7--------------|-4----------------|---11--------------- e:------------------|-5----------------|------------------|-------------------- !~~--------END GUITAR 1 RIFFS--------~~! !~~--------BASS RIFFS--------~~! C# Am Bm E g:|9----|----|--7-|9---| d:|--9--|7-9-|9---|--7-| a:|-----|----|----|----| e:|-----|----|----|----| !~~--------END BASS RIFFS--------~~! E When school is done, Am I'm just gonna have fun, Bm Me with you tonight E It's so alright Am Let's hold true to love [ -- Hold Love till 6th syallable-- ] Bm With the summer above E Can't wait for summer days now C# Hold on too me as we go Am Bm We'll drive, we'll drive away E My klick and I Am Don't know why Bm I see me and you E Holding hands being true Am I can't wait for summer to come Bm I hope it last too long Full Band: Ohhhhh E Can't wait for summer days now C# Hold on too me as we go Am Bm We'll drive, we'll drive away Outro: We'll drive so far We'll drive so far (Full band comes in after 2nd time, repeat to fade)


It's got lyrics mixed into! I'd like to know what you think?
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Old 11-04-2005, 12:36 AM   #2
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id have to hear it, i have no idea what your flow is. you didnt add a tempo. sorry man, nice tabbing thou
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Old 11-04-2005, 12:37 AM   #3
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from what im seeing, your not matchin your notes. the verse when in the key of E, what ur playing isnt in E it goes from A to D 4x.
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Old 11-04-2005, 12:47 AM   #4
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HuH.

K no0b question:

What would be in the key of E? Help explain how to determine what is in key of a certain note? I tried to stay in key but I guess I didn't.
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Old 11-04-2005, 12:52 AM   #5
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its aight man, i hope it doesnt sound like im coming down on you lol. there are scales you should learn to stay in key. see your 1st part thats in E 4x. the notes your playing arent going to match the E ur rhthm guitar plays. just goto google or yahoo and type bass scales, and find a scale that u feel comfortable with and check out the key of e
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Old 11-04-2005, 12:54 AM   #6
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Okay thanks!
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Old 11-06-2005, 09:41 PM   #7
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The lyrics suck, but the guitar part is okay.
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