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Crit PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

11-04-2005, 12:31 AM

phpn00bf4life

Why give up?

Join Date: Jul 2005

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Crit PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Crit For Crit

Code:


Intro:
Bass:
g:9---9---9---------------------------
d:--7---9---7-9-7---------------------
a:------------------------------------
e:------------------------------------


Rythem Guitar Hops In:
E(x4)
Bass:
g:9---9---9---9-----------------------
d:--7---7---7---7---------------------
a:------------------------------------
e:------------------------------------
Am(x4)
Bass:
g:------------------------------------
d:7-9-7-9-----------------------------
a:------------------------------------
e:------------------------------------
C#(x2)
g:9---9-------------------------------
d:--9---9-----------------------------
a:------------------------------------
e:------------------------------------

!~~--------GUITAR 1 RIFFS--------~~!

Verse:
  E                        Am                     Bm
e:------------------|------------------|------------------
b:--7----5----------|------------------|------------------
g:9---7-------------|--5---------------|----7-------------
d:------------------|7---5-5-9---------|-9----7-7-9-------
a:------------------|------------------|------------------
e:------------------|------------------|------------------

Chorus:
  E                        Am                    Bm                     C#
e:------------------|------------------|------------------|--------------------
b:----7-5-7-5-------|------------------|------------------|--------------------
g:--4---------------|------------------|------------------|--------------------
d:2-----------------|------------------|---6-9------------|11----9-8-9-8-6-----
a:------------------|---7--------------|-4----------------|---11---------------
e:------------------|-5----------------|------------------|--------------------

!~~--------END GUITAR 1 RIFFS--------~~!

!~~--------BASS RIFFS--------~~!

   C#    Am   Bm   E
g:|9----|----|--7-|9---|
d:|--9--|7-9-|9---|--7-|
a:|-----|----|----|----|
e:|-----|----|----|----|

!~~--------END BASS RIFFS--------~~!


E
When school is done,
Am
I'm just gonna have fun,
Bm
Me with you tonight
E
It's so alright
Am
Let's hold true to love  [ -- Hold Love till 6th syallable-- ]
Bm
With the summer above

E
Can't wait for summer days now
C#
Hold on too me as we go
Am           Bm
We'll drive, we'll drive away

E
My klick and I
Am
Don't know why
Bm
I see me and you
E
Holding hands being true
Am
I can't wait for summer to come
Bm
I hope it last too long
         Full Band:  Ohhhhh

E
Can't wait for summer days now
C#
Hold on too me as we go
Am              Bm
We'll drive, we'll drive away



Outro:

We'll drive so far

We'll drive so far (Full band comes in after 2nd time, repeat to fade)

It's got lyrics mixed into! I'd like to know what you think?

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11-04-2005, 12:36 AM	#2
HazeD Banned Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: SDMF Houston Chapter	id have to hear it, i have no idea what your flow is. you didnt add a tempo. sorry man, nice tabbing thou

11-04-2005, 12:37 AM	#3
HazeD Banned Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: SDMF Houston Chapter	from what im seeing, your not matchin your notes. the verse when in the key of E, what ur playing isnt in E it goes from A to D 4x.

11-04-2005, 12:47 AM	#4
phpn00bf4life Why give up? Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Us?	HuH. K no0b question: What would be in the key of E? Help explain how to determine what is in key of a certain note? I tried to stay in key but I guess I didn't. __________________ A loss only means a better victory is to come. Attempt not only once, but a million times. My Newest Lyrical Song (Please crit!): http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...ad.php?t=279701

11-04-2005, 12:52 AM	#5
HazeD Banned Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: SDMF Houston Chapter	its aight man, i hope it doesnt sound like im coming down on you lol. there are scales you should learn to stay in key. see your 1st part thats in E 4x. the notes your playing arent going to match the E ur rhthm guitar plays. just goto google or yahoo and type bass scales, and find a scale that u feel comfortable with and check out the key of e

11-04-2005, 12:54 AM	#6
phpn00bf4life Why give up? Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Us?	Okay thanks! __________________ A loss only means a better victory is to come. Attempt not only once, but a million times. My Newest Lyrical Song (Please crit!): http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...ad.php?t=279701

11-06-2005, 09:41 PM

S2-GreenDay-S2

UG Newbie

Join Date: Jul 2005

Location: Toronto, Ontario, Canada

The lyrics suck, but the guitar part is okay.

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Quote:

Originally Posted by HomerHitter

So anyway, I let my friend hear it today, which is about 2 months later from when I showed it to Joey, and he told me "Duuude, you stole this from Joey, this is Joey's song maaaan, he let me listen to it on his ipod..."

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