JimmyPage97

So, here's a song i really recently completed in Guitar Pro 5. meant for a 3 person band, and have no idea if vocals should even touch it.

I experiemented with tritones in this one (augmented 4ths), i think i got it to sound pretty decent.

Please feel free to comment in any way you want to, i can take it.

Thanks,
jimmypage97

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fu man chu

link?

JimmyPage97

Here's the file.

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fu man chu

haha wow how much of a tard am i, i thought you said power tabs for whatever reason. so yeah sorry dude my computer wont even open it... i really should get on downloading that

JimmyPage97

Dude definatley download guitar pro 5, best guitar/percussion program that is the most user-friendly in my opinion.

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siddyjain

umm..sorry to say but it wasnt catchy at all...but i liked the drums alot, they were very good!
but the guitar was repetitive and the only way to NOT make it sound repetitive (except of course, changing it up and all...) is to add vocals.

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JimmyPage97

what lyrics could honestly go with tri-tones? lol

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JimmyPage97

Here's a midi of the tri-tone song for anyone without guitar pro 5


here ya go ^.^

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GuitarManiac09

I didnt like it too much, but its not like it was god awful or something. It was....odd at best it just sounds too funky...its probably because a) i didnt like the powerchords you used and b) im sort of a stickler for being neat...so the time signature changes kinda gets on my nerves....but mainly it was the chords you used.
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JimmyPage97

Well, my power chords were tritones in most cases.

(e.g. 1 on low e, 2 on low a string)

Could you recommend how to make it more catchy? I really like this tune and you seem to know "catchy" stuff

Thanks man,

jimmypage97

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mrmo

Well, there was something about those powerchords that didn't sound right, or maybe I'm just stupid an have no ear for music.

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JimmyPage97

anyone with led zeppelin as there comment has an ear for music

lol

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JimmyPage97

Anyone else want to listen to this song? i think it's innovative and i would like more opinions on it, i'd crit you song for you if you critted mine, thanks.

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ouchies

I liked the second theme and i liked that you changed time signatures a lot, but it was still really repetitive. try to vary the song structure a little bit or add some single note riffs.

irishmatt1992

like the bars 37-40, all instruments sound good there

wierd chords I know, maybe add different things and a solo too

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Night_Lights

nice drums, the breakdowns pretty sweet.

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sounds pretty cool, reminds me of dillinger a bit with all the dissonance and wierd time signatures but its cool