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Old 09-05-2006, 09:01 PM   #1
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GP5, Nu-metal/metalcore song.

something I whipped up
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Old 09-05-2006, 11:17 PM   #3
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There was something about it, too many paralell minor thirds on short notes. And for some reason, i think you need to group your thoughts together, ya know? There is so much cluttered melodies, i think you have to think more realisticly about people's ability to learn so much material.

However, i really liked the transitions and overall effect of measures:

23-26 because the bass felt included,
31-34 the drums behind the euitars was really cool.
measure 40 - i don't know, the eigth note run just grabbed me, the atonality of it struck me as genius.

Keep it up, just group your melodies.

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Old 09-06-2006, 06:19 PM   #4
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i wasnt really digging it for some reason :[
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