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Old 05-20-2007, 02:06 PM   #1
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my zygoma lives in a xanadu

my zygoma lives in a xanadu

my zygoma rolls off my face
to the xanadu where it lives
sleeps a year and wakes for two
crucify his soul and you crucify me
my zygoma keeps a mallet in his pocket
this can't replace what they did to me
when the soldiers jeered at us
through the packing of ice
they rebuff their options
while my zygoma's spirit evaporates
through the letter box
of the nobleman’s house
where they print certificates
for risk and rivalry, onto mules legs
with fine powder, not ink
spreading propaganda
with a special number plate
that tells them to converge
at the ingress of the train station
to enter the oxygen tent
where the king will jabber
regrettable comments about the queen
who we agree is subordinate
but study's zoology at night
where she gained her halo
and her plaque
and her significance
as a pawn
but continued her career as a still-life painter
and zany comedian
and after a hole Olympiad
she reformed her reputation as a disreputable mason
but all this doesn't matter
because my zygoma lives in a xanadu
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Old 05-20-2007, 02:16 PM   #2
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trippy, cool, but trippy - almost as trippy as my song, "Credo" (not that my lyrics are as trippy as yours, just the actualy song). I liked those lyrics, though, even though they were very trippy. Good job.
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Old 05-20-2007, 02:25 PM   #3
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I just flicked through a dictionary and picked randow words that i liked lol. I heard David Bowie did it for one of his songs. It was real fun and you could technically go on fore ever.
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Old 05-20-2007, 03:23 PM   #4
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I just flicked through a dictionary and picked randow words that i liked lol. I heard David Bowie did it for one of his songs. It was real fun and you could technically go on fore ever.


You can tell. This whole thing seems like you just got a million words and glued them together with no real form. Still, it does sort of create a weird tone... maybe that's what you were going for. Seriously. This whole thing is a bit strange, and it doesn't (or could it possibly) make any earthly sense.
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Old 05-21-2007, 11:03 AM   #5
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I think it does make sense, slightly. I picked one word for each line and tried to link them up as best i could. I think i diod an eccelant job. *pats self on back*
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Old 05-21-2007, 05:27 PM   #6
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Yeah, and i really think this song would go well with some pink floyd music and stuff, expecially if the listener was in a "Hightened state of mind"
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Old 05-24-2007, 04:24 AM   #7
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You can tell. This whole thing seems like you just got a million words and glued them together with no real form. Still, it does sort of create a weird tone... maybe that's what you were going for. Seriously. This whole thing is a bit strange, and it doesn't (or could it possibly) make any earthly sense.


but it does! Theres not really much i can say that hasnt been said before. This is a good piece of writing, very trippy haha
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