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Old 06-30-2015, 06:27 PM   #1
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song i made what do you think?

this is a song i created in Garageband its just an instrumental rock song and still needs lyrics. what do you guys think of it so far?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N5b7ZepkJS4
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Old 06-30-2015, 07:21 PM   #2
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Are you asking for specifics? Like, how is it as a rock song? What sections speak to us musically?

If you're asking about recording quality, of course...well...that belongs in the record forum.



But, really, what do you want to know?
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Old 06-30-2015, 07:26 PM   #3
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i just wanna know what you think? do you like it? should i change something? stuff like that
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Old 06-30-2015, 09:24 PM   #4
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Old 06-30-2015, 09:43 PM   #5
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ur over thinking it just tell me if you like it or not. and what could be fixed.
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Old 06-30-2015, 09:56 PM   #6
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Old 07-01-2015, 05:03 AM   #7
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Post it here if you want feedback:

http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...isplay.php?f=51

There's nothing wrong with it, but you need to add something to it (a melody). Only after that I can tell if it sounds boring or not. Most songs sound pretty boring with accompaniment instruments only.
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Old 07-01-2015, 10:41 AM   #8
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^This. The only melody here is the accompaniment, and it's a bad melody.
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Old 07-01-2015, 10:53 AM   #9
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gotta fix that drum fill as well.
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Old 07-01-2015, 10:57 AM   #10
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I'm not gonna listen to it but it's probably not great. Maybe it is though and I'm just missing out.
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Old 07-01-2015, 11:09 PM   #11
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i know theres no melody but thats where the lyrics come in.
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Old 07-02-2015, 12:54 AM   #12
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isn't that kind of a key piece of the puzzle to leave out when uploading something and asking for feedback
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