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Old 03-03-2015, 09:50 PM   #1
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another blood moon for July

something a little weirder for now:

mason.gmu.edu/~ebrumbac/rambutans
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behind these two hills here I fall asleep.
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Old 03-04-2015, 10:10 AM   #2
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the ending kills me. you are so cool. somehow this stays warm
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Old 03-11-2015, 07:50 AM   #3
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Thanks Saadia. The warmth is definitely what I worry about most with this kind of thing.
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Old 03-11-2015, 10:49 PM   #4
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I liked this. And part of me liked the HTML tricks, but part of me doesn't. I don't really know yet.
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Old 03-12-2015, 10:51 PM   #5
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I loved this poem the first time you put it on here, and I still love it now. The fanciness with this is certainly awesome, but i wish there was a little more time to digest each iteration of the second half of the poem since there seems to be an intent to differentiate each one. I'm not sure if that's just a coding/computer thing that you could fix. It was just hard to coherently follow what was going on in the latter part of the piece considering how fast the stanzas were changing in and out.

Other than that though, still beautiful.
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