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Old 06-01-2008, 11:23 PM   #1
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Well, really I don't know what I was thinking when I made this song, but some flies where bugging me, and so I wrote a song about it
Meh, I may fix a few wrong notes in there maybe tomorrow...


Disclaimer:In the solo, it may appear that the little bird is shot, but in fact it is all staged, and the bird received no damage whatsoever...
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Old 06-02-2008, 08:58 AM   #2
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Wow, now this was something truly original. Overall really good, I enjoyed the interlude the most. The gunshots and everything got abit annoying in guitar pro though, it would probably sound better recorded.

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Old 06-02-2008, 11:35 AM   #3
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Pretty cool, only part I didn't like was the chorus, not sure why.

Sorry for the short crit, no reason to go into great detail. The bird tweet part was really cool, the whole thing was kind of funny.
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Old 06-28-2008, 01:15 AM   #4
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dude, the sound effects win soooo much

but gimmicks aside, this was actually a very nice composition. I love how the instruments really do compliment eachother, and it always seems to be moving. gunshots did get kind of annoying after awhile. maybe not use them as much.

but overall, beautiful piece. I loved the originality
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Old 06-28-2008, 12:19 PM   #5
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Really unique. Kind of a whole "Peter and the Wolf" type thing, with the different "characters" represented by different instruments. All the whistle-blowing parts were very melodic, and the whole tone of the piece was really cool. I loved the bird tweets.
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Old 06-29-2008, 09:33 AM   #6
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Very unique indeed. And I gotta say I just loved it, very relaxing to listen to. Also interesting and kinda funny. Very good song imo.
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Old 11-03-2008, 02:02 PM   #7
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i liked the interlude best part i thort the rest is all gd make the rest more like the interlude style! not that the rest is bad but the interlude is gr8!

nice 1

and thanks 4 the crit
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Old 11-03-2008, 04:41 PM   #8
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lol, this made me smile. it was a good instrumental, very melodic. but then it sounds like there is background noise with the flies and the gunshots. then the poor little birdy. it sounds like something i would hear in a childrens movie :P but yeah, like everyone else said, the gunshots got a little old.

this is a very original piece though. good job
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Old 11-03-2008, 05:03 PM   #9
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This was awesome! I was smiling all the way through and not many songs get me smiling

The song was very melodic and something truly original for a change. I loved the solo part and interlude was great too. Nothing bad in this song. 10/10
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Old 11-03-2008, 05:05 PM   #10
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It was kinda funny, like music I'd expect in a disney movey

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Old 11-03-2008, 06:47 PM   #11
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Lol thanks

I wanted the solo to be without the flute for most of it, but those damn flies and birds don't know how to sing
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Old 11-29-2008, 06:09 AM   #12
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This is fantastic, really does sound like it could be used for some kid's movie soundtrack. The solo was bizarre, but pretty awesome nonetheless. I can't really suggest any ways to improve it because there's no way I could figure out exactly what you were really going for
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Old 02-20-2009, 07:50 AM   #13
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lol, never heard a song with sound effects that made me laugh this muchXD
Awesome how the flies and bird get shotXD

really a unique piece, you don't often see this many effects combining to in the end form a great song, to my vision you should leave it as it is,
it sounds awesome this way:p

maybe you can make an entire orchestra version out of it?
put piano and violins behind it, and give it a really dark sound:p
that way it will really sound like some sort of classical piece and not a disney movie or something:p
not that it's not awesome this way though..
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Old 02-20-2009, 01:51 PM   #14
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I changed the 'sounds' to instruments and I liked it a lot better
(the gunshots to a distorted guitar, with some added dissonance and higher pitch
the bird as a cute nylon guitar, the interlude instrument as a piano, the drum as a piccolo bass
the solo instrument was changed to a jazz guitar, I think)

anyway, I liked it.
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Old 06-29-2012, 04:08 PM   #17
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