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Old 11-12-2008, 04:36 AM   #21
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Old 11-12-2008, 10:25 PM   #22
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I think that was more of a story than a song

11/10 for hilarity ^^
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Old 11-12-2008, 11:34 PM   #23
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My god. That was astounding.
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Old 11-13-2008, 08:19 AM   #24
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Haha... you don't have to be "mathy" all the time...
...I mean like, a third of a bar of 4/4 now and then, is okay.

On with the crit...

Love the intro drums, and the boinky bassline... and I really like that chord in bar 4.
Oh yes indeed.

And then, POWER BASS LINE, BASS LINE OF POWER!!!

I only got GP4, but midi bass does sound like a farting frog, so...

The kick drum use in bar 35 is simple, yet effective as a fill. Bravo.

Yay 7/8, also... win drumbeat!

I like the bass when it comes back in, and even more when it's on chords.
Whoever said Primus first, was not wrong.

Bar 21 onwards rules on rhodes piano chords.

Nice bit of 13/8 there. And a cool bassline just after... really... megatoad-like.

Liking the whammy bar use in the bullfrog bit. And the nuts drum rolls. Really well done.

Bar 39 and 40 are probably my faves so far.

...SCRAP THAT!!! LOOK AT THAT EFFING SWAMP!!! That riff is amazing!!!

The percussion from here on is really swampy, and those synth chords are very evil.
They remind me of Deeper Underground. Good ol' Jamiroquai.

Bar 81... boom boom boom boom... ribbit xD

I love the whining guitar over that, and the "drip drop" drums are very good.

And when that cowbell kicks in, the piece seems to literally plod along.

I like the bar 113 fill, and the use of further cowbell. And an unbelievably good riff.
It's rather Pantera-ish to my ear. Also, I will die TOADay... very good...
...and yay, bar 132 = mega win bubbletoad riff. I like the way you added a second bass, and there is cowbell, and birds? And all sorts of synth. It creates a big sound.

Bar 148 - simple, but effective.

Bar 149 - YAY! More Pantera stylee riffing. If anything, this riff should be longer, just keep varying the drums under it ...see, you COULD use more cowbell.

I like the way you end the riff on a big powerchord, and then crash one cymbal to lead back into the next drum beat.

Really cool ending, actually, I am still digging that chord.

I genuinely liked this =D



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Old 11-13-2008, 04:19 PM   #25
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i think this should be in archive of best threads, or at least an archive of best UGer songs should be made!!!
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Old 11-13-2008, 05:41 PM   #26
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That was probably in the top 3 best songs I've ever heard on this forum. No negatives whatsoever.
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Old 11-14-2008, 09:01 AM   #27
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omg this is crazy sh!t i must say obviously i couldnt write a song like this really crazy notes and percussion usage , yet its a good song, absolutely rocksss!!
8/10 - i think its better, just not my style

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Old 11-14-2008, 01:57 PM   #28
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haha

incredible work by the way, that was one of the most interesting things i've heard on here
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Old 11-16-2008, 01:24 AM   #29
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I loved it . One of the best things I've heard in a while.
I kinda reminds me of Behold...The Arctopus (in a good way)
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Old 11-16-2008, 01:40 AM   #30
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dude, 10/10

that was sick...

it goes against my musical taste in every which way

and yet im in awe...
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Old 11-16-2008, 03:12 AM   #31
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I want a bad review for this guys! Too many good reviews!

Make me feel like shit!
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Old 11-16-2008, 03:34 AM   #32
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pretty god damn insane dude, really proggy i liked it

7.5/10

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Old 11-16-2008, 03:48 AM   #33
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If you could provide a link to said song I would be happy.
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Old 11-16-2008, 04:31 AM   #34
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in my sig dude

ive listend to yours like 10 times now
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Old 11-17-2008, 12:14 AM   #35
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I want a bad review for this guys! Too many good reviews!

Make me feel like shit!
how bout i make you feel like crap?

i cant bag on the song though. sorry. you're out of luck
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Old 11-17-2008, 06:33 AM   #36
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I don't think I can even say anything about this. Pure awesomeness.

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Old 11-17-2008, 07:02 AM   #37
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Can I just say and start with "I hate metal". Really dispise it apart from those ones that make you smile, through the fire and the flames and so on. This was one of those songs. I couldnt care that it would be loud and difficult to dance to!

I F'n loved it. The lil story helped keep me intrested admittedly but still...BRILLIANT

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Old 11-17-2008, 06:10 PM   #38
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Bubble Bobble and BattleToads combined. It makes total sense. Spectacular Bass even with midi. Very interesting use of drum percussion. Very Agreeable to the ears. "Look at that swamp"
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That Was Reeaaally Impressive. =) Some Really Weird Stuff But Man It Would Be So Hard To Write Something Like This. Anyway 10/10. Could You Crit One Of Our Songs? Thanks!
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A very fun listen. I'd wish i had bad things to say and normally do, but this was really a blast to listen to. Thanks for actually using your brain in the making of this, your work shows.
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