This is not meant to be an overly in depth lesson but if it is appreciated and liked I will further expand upon the concepts. The structure of this lesson is in semi song form so that you can see how to connect the various peices and styles together into a flowing form.
Part 1
Gtr I (E A D G B E) - 'Untitled'
4/4
Gtr I
PM------------------------------------------------------------------|
S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S
|-------------------------------------|----------------------------------|
|-------------------------------------|----------------------------------|
|-------------------8-8-8-8-----------|----------------------------------|
|---------9-9-10-10---------9-9-------|---------7-7-7-7---------4-4-5-5--|
|-7-7-7-7-----------------------10-10-|-5-5-5-5---------5-5-5-5----------|
|-------------------------------------|----------------------------------|
This little riff is a major component of death metal whether melodic or brutal style. Single note trem picking is utilized throughout the death metal genre. You can alter this to fit your tastes by choosing a different scale or by simply going more chromatic. You can also alter the rhythmic placement of the notes to make the riff busier and more technical sounding of slow the change of the notes to get a slower ride on each scale tone. Both can be used in the same song to fit certain moods that you want to create. Turn on your metronome for this entire song and try them both once you know all the parts
PM| PM| PM PM PM|
E S S E S S S S S S Q E E E E E E E E
||---------------------------|------------------||
||o--------------------------|-----------------o||
||---------------------------|------------------||
||--5-----7------9---7-------|-----5-----4------||
||o-7-----9-----10---9---10--|-5-4-7-----5-----o||
||----0-0---0-0----0---0--8--|-3-2---0-0---0-0--||The next riff in the piece can be used as a verse riff or or a hook. The melodic context makes it easy for a listener to grasp but is also very suited for vocals over it. Again you can change the scale base for this riff to try different melodic motif's. also take this as a starting point and try shifting your accent chords and your low e pedal tones to different places to change the feel. For example, try starting out with the low e pedal tone instead of the chord.
S S S S Q Q Q S S S S S S S S S S S S Q 4x
|------------------------||------------------------------||
|------------------------||o----------------------------o||
|---------------------5--||------------------------------||
|-----4-5-------------5--||------------------------------||
|-4-5-2S3-3tr6--2tr5--3--||o-4-5---4-5---4-5---4---5-2--o||
|-2S3--------------------||--2-3-0-2-3-0-2-3-0-2-0-3-0---||
The next riff shifts gears into a more brutal and thrash style to create a moment of tension in the song. you could use it as an instrumental section or a vocal section. its all about planning how you want your song to sound. perhaps here you want the instruments to breathe while the drums grind... Or you could go with some high pitched vocals in the style of old deicide.
That is the point of this lesson more than anything else is to show you some of the basic death metal techniques and stylistic elements.... but to think in a songwriting format as well.
Q E E E E Q Q S S S S S S S S S S S S Q E E E E Q
|---------------|----------------------------|---------------|
|---------------|----------------------------|---------------|
|---------------|----------------------------|---------------|
|------------7--|------------5-5-----2-2-----|------------7--|
|-5--5-----5-5--|-3------3-3-----3-3-----3-3-|-5--5-----5-5--|
|-3--3---0-3-5--|-1--1-1---------------------|-3--3---0-3-5--|
S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S Q T T T T T T E E T T T T T T E
|---------------------------------||------------------------------------|
|---------------------------------||o-----------------------------------|
|---------------------------------||--7--------------7-6-------------9--|
|---------7-7---------6-6---------||--6--------------6-5-------------8--|
|-0-0-5-5-----0-0-5-5-----7-7-----||o-5--------------5-4-------------7--|
|-----------------------------0-0-||-----0-0-0-0-0-0-----0-0-0-0-0-0----|
Q T T T T T T Q E T T T T T T
|----------------------------------||
|---------------------------------o||
|-7--------------5--4--------------||
|-6--------------------------------||
|-5--------------3--2-------------o||
|----0-0-0-0-0-0------0-0-0-0-0-0--||
These next two riffs could be thought of as a chorus followed by a bridge. The guitar parts slow down a bit so that you could put the focus on your chorus message... ver similar to the band Death in its later days. The following riff that we will call the bridge riff is similar to Morbid Angel, Emperor or even Cynics less jazzy or technical moments.
PM------------------------------------------------------------------|
S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S
|-------------------------------------|---------------------------------|
|-------------------------------------|---------------------------------|
|-------------------8-8-8-8-----------|---------------------------------|
|---------9-9-10-10---------9-9-------|---------7-7-7-7---------4-4-5-5-|
|-7-7-7-7-----------------------10-10-|-5-5-5-5---------5-5-5-5---------|
|-------------------------------------|---------------------------------|
PM| PM| PM PM PM|
E S S E S S S S S S Q E E E E E E E E
||---------------------------|------------------||
||o--------------------------|-----------------o||
||---------------------------|------------------||
||--5-----7------9---7-------|-----5-----4------||
||o-7-----9-----10---9---10--|-5-4-7-----5-----o||
||----0-0---0-0----0---0--8--|-3-2---0-0---0-0--||
S S S S Q Q Q S S S S S S S S S S S S Q 4x
|------------------------||------------------------------||
|------------------------||o----------------------------o||
|---------------------5--||------------------------------||
|-----4-5-------------5--||------------------------------||
|-4-5-2S3-3tr6--2tr5--3--||o-4-5---4-5---4-5---4---5-2--o||
|-2S3--------------------||--2-3-0-2-3-0-2-3-0-2-0-3-0---||
Q S S S S S S Q S S Q S S S S E E E E
||-----------------------|----------------------||
||o----------------------|---------------------o||
||-----------------------|------------------10--||
||-----------------------|----------------8-----||
||o--------3-------6-----|-5------3-----6------o||
||--0--0-0-1-0-0-0-4-0-0-|-3--0-0-1-0-0---------||The song repeats from the beginning then has an outro which is similar to older dm bands like Obituary.
If you are new to death metal this should help you quite a bit. Whether you like the music this lesson creates or not doesnt matter. what does matter is the fact you have just been taught quite a few various rhythmic, melodic and chordal ideas that are involved within the genre. Take your time learn the examples and then jam on them until you create something of your own.
By the way this song lesson was written in powertab without a guitar in around ten minutes lol enjoy
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Duration Legend
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W - whole; H - half; Q - quarter; E - 8th; S - 16th; T - 32nd; X - 64th; a - acciaccatura
+ - note tied to previous; . - note dotted; .. - note double dotted
Uncapitalized letters represent notes that are staccato (1/2 duration)
Irregular groupings are notated above the duration line
Duration letters will always appear directly above the note/fret number it represents the duration for. Duration letters with no fret number below them represent rests. Multi- bar rests are notated in the form Wxn, where n is the number of bars to rest for. Low melody durations appear below the staff
Tablature Legend
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h - hammer-on
p - pull-off
b - bend
pb - pre-bend
r - bend release (if no number after the r, then release immediately)
/\ - slide into or out of (from/to "nowhere")
s - legato slide
S - shift slide
- natural harmonic
[n] - artificial harmonic
n(n) - tapped harmonic
~ - vibrato
tr - trill
T - tap
TP - trem. picking
PM - palm muting
\n/ - tremolo bar dip; n = amount to dip
\n - tremolo bar down
n/ - tremolo bar up
/n\ - tremolo bar inverted dip
= - hold bend; also acts as connecting device for hammers/pulls
<> - volume swell (louder/softer)
x - on rhythm slash represents muted slash
o - on rhythm slash represents single note slash
Misc Legend
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| - bar
|| - double bar
||o - repeat start
o|| - repeat end
*| - double bar (ending)
: - bar (freetime)
$ - Segno
& - Coda
Tempo markers -
= BPM(8/16=s8/s16), where s8 = swing 8ths, s16 = swing 16ths---
** Generated using Power Tab Editor by Brad Larsen: The Official Power Tab Web Site
1) there is an awful lot of things in your legend that don't show up in the lesson (not really a big deal but I wanted to point it out), so they pretty much just take up space, not to mention the natural harmonic doesn't have a symbol in the legend.
2) there is no tempo mentioned making it difficult to set your metronome to a final destination for all the 'student' knows the tempo could be as high as 210bpm or as low as 40bpm...
3) it's wonderful that you wrote the song in ten minutes without a guitar, that tells me that if you had used a guitar and put actual time into it you probably would have made a better lesson. I like to teach guitar and music theory and I gotta say I spend easily 4-5 hours writing a half hour lesson, mostly because I like to make sure that all my info is accurate and that any and all exercises are relevant and helpful.
4) this would be at least 50% more effective if there was some sort of audio that can be heard for each riff. that is a big thing that is typically overlooked by alot of people making lessons. It would have been very helpful if you gave us riffs from songs instead of just "...ver(y) similar to the band Death in its later days" because anyone new to death metal may not know what is new Death and what is old Death. or (better yet) added clips of you playing the riffs so the 'student' knows what they are supposed to sound like.
Sorry that I had so much critisism but it seems like this lesson was rushed (it might just be that you added the whole ten minutes to write the song thing). Looking at this from the perspective of someone who is trying to learn (and is quite possibly unfimiliar with the topic), I seriously ended this feeling like I may have wasted time reading it, meaning I have not really learned anything other than: "play a riff like this and another one kind of like this and here's the name of a band that plays music and now play a riff like this and heres some note durations bye!"
you seem pretty well spoken and overall there aren't a ton of spelling errors so I personally feel like you can probably write some really good lessons. also you weren't completely boring and broke up the writing well enough that it seems like you can make these lessons rather interesting. Also I hope my comments didn't come off too harsh, and they help you in terms of writing your next lesson.