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Tips And Hints

author: Kizzer00901 date: 12/10/2008 category: songwriting & lyrics
rating: 8.2 / votes: 13 
POSTED: 12/10/2008 - 09:25 am
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fender351 :
"Eating is great, but I'm not fat,
ooh a pie, I'll have some of that!"

I lol'd
=D

POSTED: 12/10/2008 - 03:30 pm / quote |
Mettliccaa :
[quote]fender351 :
"Eating is great, but I'm not fat,
ooh a pie, I'll have some of that!"

I lol'd
=D /quote]

I second this. Nice article.

POSTED: 12/21/2008 - 07:02 pm / quote |
Darkkon :
Baha.
POSTED: 12/22/2008 - 02:00 am / quote |
Elmo luvs u :
very nice
I do the same as you when i write and think of words that rhyme first
( i must say that even though you dont think its song material "Eating is great, but I'm not fat,
ooh a pie, I'll have some of that!" would be gud fun to sing! )

POSTED: 12/24/2008 - 09:07 pm / quote |
definedbytime1 :
I say I do the opposite of what you do when rhyming.
I write a line down then find out what rhymes with it.
"Words can not be taken back,
only be covered with new.
Momentos of our dead love
are becoming so few."
Something that I wrote.
I usually try to connect the rhyming words with a line between.

POSTED: 12/26/2008 - 09:56 pm / quote |
roland_96 :
It gets the basic idea, but their really should be an article on how not to make every song sound like a love/breakup song. Okay Article.
POSTED: 12/27/2008 - 05:54 pm / quote |
loveless13 :
dude omg i needed so much help! thank you!
POSTED: 12/30/2008 - 02:13 pm / quote |
RIOTex :
Thnx dude this reall helps man
POSTED: 01/02/2009 - 02:58 am / quote |
IRISH_PUNK13 :
i love this lesson it really helps oh and what kind of pie i hope cocanut creme
POSTED: 01/08/2009 - 02:51 pm / quote |
masterofkittens :
wow not a single bad comment ... well, why start now lol. Great job that helped (seriously)
POSTED: 01/19/2009 - 12:52 pm / quote |
PotatomanDave :
thanks a great help..and of course the pie bit ;D
POSTED: 01/23/2009 - 07:47 am / quote |
sayhi666sal :
never thought of it like that

i like sit

POSTED: 01/24/2009 - 04:07 pm / quote |
Dionysius8421 :
Sitting oe'r the blackened dell
Satan's legions come from hell
Fly to strike me down at last
It's not poss'ble, I'm too fast.


Yeah, this pretty much freaking rocks (lesson and that thing)

One thing is missing. The couplet by Abdul Alhazred.

That is not dead which can eternal die
And with strange aeons even death may die.

POSTED: 02/01/2009 - 09:02 am / quote |
blackSseries :
this is a little different but i also use how im feeling at the time and i wrote this verse while i was on a boat in the middle of the gulf of mexico for my wife - not much rhyming -
"its a long and dusty road"
"i just wish that you were here"
"your face i cant recall"
"but your memory is always here"
"but baby wont you call"
"just let me know your near"

just something a little different

POSTED: 02/05/2009 - 04:09 pm / quote |
blackSseries :
or mabye just a little rhyming
POSTED: 02/05/2009 - 04:10 pm / quote |
mrvosa :
Seems like your aim was mainly to rhyme... it has a lil bit of depth but i feel there's room for improvement black series....
POSTED: 02/06/2009 - 07:16 pm / quote |
Lotsagrapes :
Cool story bro.
POSTED: 02/09/2009 - 11:22 pm / quote |
red core bass :
i cant go on
i need to go
the time has come
for me to go

what do you think its about suicide lol i have a full song but i dont want anyone nicking my lyrics lol

POSTED: 02/12/2009 - 12:39 pm / quote |
red core bass :
i cant go on
i need to go
this time has come
for me to go

what do u all think its about suicide (not my own suicide)

POSTED: 02/12/2009 - 12:40 pm / quote |
Symph.Core :
a simple lesson...
Lol funny eating rhymes

good job ^^

POSTED: 02/13/2009 - 08:14 am / quote |
Symph.Core :
Breaking Away Aint So Easy
Suicidal, Going Crazy
Screaming In Me
Just Break Free
Release the Demon in me..

My bands Song ^^

POSTED: 02/13/2009 - 08:17 am / quote |
Kizzer00901 :
This article was aimed at beginners who want to get their rhyming skills better, I know its not the best for overall song writing but I hope it helped, Thanks for reading .
POSTED: 02/16/2009 - 11:06 am / quote |
Glob79 :
This lesson really help thanks
Here is what i came up with
"Time goes on and i guess we'll see
If that's the man I was born to be
I'll try real hard to make it true
I'll try real hard cause I love you"
IS the good?

POSTED: 02/17/2009 - 10:29 pm / quote |
Glob79 :
Glob79 wrote:

This lesson really help thanks
Here is what i came up with
"Time goes on and i guess we'll see
If that's the man I was born to be
I'll try real hard to make it true
I'll try real hard cause I love you"
IS the good?
I ment"Is This good"

POSTED: 02/17/2009 - 10:31 pm / quote |
missmarou :
i love composing lyrics.. we have dsame strategy
POSTED: 03/03/2009 - 11:02 pm / quote |
missmarou :

POSTED: 03/03/2009 - 11:03 pm / quote |
Chill. :
I love writing lyrics, here is what i came up with: "another cannon gone bipolar,stripped down...cant get much lower, quicksands got no sense of humour and Im still laughing."
POSTED: 03/28/2009 - 08:52 am / quote |
Symie :
Awesome lyrics Chill. It's almost exactly like Shinedowns Sound of Madness! Their's goes like this:

"Another loose cannon gone bipolar,stripped down...Couldn't get much lower, quicksands got no sense of humour and Im still laughing like hell."

POSTED: 04/01/2009 - 08:35 am / quote |
HannibalX :
Chill. wrote:

I love writing lyrics, here is what i came up with: "another cannon gone bipolar,stripped down...cant get much lower, quicksands got no sense of humour and Im still laughing."
Symie wrote:

Awesome lyrics Chill. It's almost exactly like Shinedowns Sound of Madness! Their's goes like this:

"Another loose cannon gone bipolar,stripped down...Couldn't get much lower, quicksands got no sense of humour and Im still laughing like hell."


bwahahahahahah

POSTED: 04/07/2009 - 06:10 am / quote |
Columbian :
Dude thanks so much i needed a lot of help!!!!!
POSTED: 08/01/2009 - 06:53 pm / quote |
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