nicely done!

can u like put in verse and chorus and all that nice stuff cuz i cant read it all that well

cool cool you get my blessing

its a good tab, but it would be a hell of alot easier to read if there wernt a million riffs and u just wrote verse, chorus, etc

in the intro the main riff goes like this
----
----
-----4
---x-2
---x-2 (with this extra 2)
-0---
I've got the official tab book here right now but you probably played by ear. Good stuff pretty decent.

sounds great i had, and tab books arent actually renditions theyre tabbed by a guy who sits and listens to the song not the band
-----------------
-----------555---
-----------444---
---2---xx--222---
---2---xx--------
---0-------------

You tell us is right and dertjoe is wrong. I know tab books are often more complicated than they need to be, are not by the real artist, and can be wrong, but in this case it is 100% right.

try this.
|--------------|
|--------------|
|---------444--|
|-----xx--222--|
|--2--xx--222--|
|--0------000--|

and then on "Riff 2" try
|-----------------------------------|
|-----------------------------------|
|----------44---------0-------------|
|------xx--22-------4----0h2p0------|
|---2--xx--22-----5------------3h5--|
|---0------00---5-------------------|

not saying you're wrong that's just how I've always played it.