12th Day Tab

I'm a newb tabber but I didn't like how the other one sounded (which is copied to about 
different sites..). Hope ya like it.

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Tabber: Brian (bcarey9@gmail.com)
Tuning: Drop D
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~:slide

Intro
e|-------------------------------------------------------------------------|
B|------9-------9------9------9-------9-------9-------9-------9------------|
G|----8-------8------8------8-------8-------8-------8-------8--------------|
D|--6-----6-6----6-6----6-6-----6-6-----6-6-----6-6-----6-6----------------|
A|-------------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|-------------------------------------------------------------------------|

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e|---------------------------| x2  e|---------------------------| x2
B|---------------------------|     B|---------------------------|
G|---------8-9-8-8-9-9~11-11-|     G|--9-9-9--8-9-8-8-9-9~11-11-|
D|--6-6-6--x-x-x-x-x-x-x--x--|     D|--9-9-9--x-x-x-x-x-x-x--x--|
A|--6-6-6--6-7-6-6-7-7~9--9--|     A|--7-7-7--6-7-6-6-7-7~9--9--|
D|--6-6-6--------------------|     D|---------------------------|

x2
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e|------------------------|
B|------------------------|
G|------------------------|
D|9-9-9-9-9-9-9-9-9-9-9-9-|
A|9-9-9-9-9-9-9-9-9-9-9-9-|
D|9-9-9-9-9-9-9-9-9-9-9-9-|

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I doubt it's perfect as I'm still just learning and this is my first time tabbing so 
feedback is accepted..