Take Me Away Tab

i know this aint right, its just a sort of guideline b'cos i aint good at makeing tabs, 
i cant help it if u cant play guitar and blame the song, you should be able to see the 
little gaps in this and what's spozed to be there.

just corrections please and not telling me how sh*te it is would be nice :-)

ok, standard tuneing, a bit distortion and right at the start theres 
a cool wee pic slide thingy between the "D" and "A" strings, its only that b'cos 
i dunno what you call it

 h-hammer-on
 p-pull-off
 b-bend
 3b3 - like bend it on the 3rd and back again, but only hit it once

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b----------------------------------1---------------------------------
g----------------------------------1---------------------------------
d---1h3----1h3---1h3p1------------------3b3----1---------------------
a-------------------------3--1----------------------3----------------
e--------------------------------------------------------------------

                                  |- hit this 5 times
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---11-----11------11p9-----------------------------------------------
-------------------------10-------8b------------b8-------------------
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                                           |-bend this till its the same note
                                           | and play it 4x 
---13---13----13-----13-----13---------------------------------------
---------------------------------16p13----13-------------------------
------------------------------------------15b------p13--------13-----
----------------------------------------------------------15---------
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---13----------------------------------------------------------------
---------16p14p13--13--14--14--14--14---16--16--16--16---------------
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---13h15---15--15----15---13---------13---15----13-------------------
-------------------------------15---------------------15-------------
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        i dunno how many times these notes are hit, 
        let them ring and it sounds ok
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                                 :-)