Better Off Alone Bass Tab

This is my first tab so dont be too harsh, tabbed from ear.

Structure:
Intro/Verse
Chorus
Verse
Chorus
Bridge
Chorus x2
Outro

Bass comes in just before vocals.

|Intro/Verse|
(leave out the 15\3 the second time)
G|---------|-----2~-----------------------------   |---------|---------|
D|---------|---0------------5~------------------   |---------|---------|
A|---------|--------------5---------------------x2 |-3-33035-|-0-00035-|
E|---15\3-3|--3-----3----3-------0-303-5--0-303-5  |---------|---------|
             G                  E                    C         A

G|---------|------------|
D|---------|------------|
A|-3-33035-|-0-0-7750---|
E|---------|----------3-|
   C          A

|Chorus|
G|---------|-------------------|-----------------|---------|
D|---------|-------------------|-----------------|---------|
A|---------|-------------------|-3-3035-0-0-7750-|---------|
E|-3-33035-|-0-0-3035-0-0-3035-|-----------------|-3-33035-|
   G         E                   C      A          G

Verse 2 is exactly the same as verse one (bass come in 1:30 with the 15\3)

then Chorus

|Bridge|
G|------------------------------------------|
D|---4-----4------2-------------------------|
A|-2---2-2---2--0---0-0------------------0~-|
E|----------------------3-2-0-00-0-02-3-----|
   B                    G
BREAK until 2:49

G|--------|
D|--------|
A|-7750---|
E|------3-|

Chorus x2

End on
G|----------|
D|-----4~~~-|
A|-2-2------|
E|----------|

It may not be exactly right but its the way i play it and it sounds pretty okay. Tell me 
theres anything wrong with it.