Hosanna Tab

I know that Hillsong doesn't play it this way, but the strumming pattern confused me a 
bit. :S So I came up with this.
And so you know, this IS my first tab. aha

e|------------------8-7-|------------------------|
B|-----8----8---10------|----8-----8-10-12-------|
G|-------7--------------|------9-----------------|
D|---5------------------|--9-----9---------------|
A|----------------------|------------------------|
E|----------------------|------------------------|

e|--------------|---------------|
B|--12-13-12----|-12-13-12--7---|
G|------------9-|---------------|
D|--------------|---------------|
A|--------------|---------------|
E|--------------|---------------|

Can also be played:

e|------------------3-2-|------------------------|
B|-----3----3---5-------|----3-----4-5-7---------|
G|-------2--------------|------4-----------------|
D|---0------------------|--4-----4---------------|
A|----------------------|------------------------|
E|----------------------|------------------------|

e|--------------|---------------|
B|--7-8-7-------|-7-8-7--2------|
G|------------4-|---------------|
D|--------------|---------------|
A|--------------|---------------|
E|--------------|---------------|
(obviously the same thing, lol)

That is as far as I've gotten on it, and I would really like some feed back if possible.

                                                              Thank You