St Anger Tab

this is my first tab i have ever done but alot of people tried the new st. anger
song and they are close but not right... i picked it out by sound and i bought
the cd yesterday and its great you should all buy it but i watched the dvd and
watched hetfield's fingering and got this....

Dropped C.. 1/2 step down then put ur top string to C

eb|-----------------------------------|
Bb|-----------------------------------|
Gb|-----------------------------------| repeat twice and on 3rd time play 
Db|-----------------------------------| everything but the |--2-2-2-2-| 
Ab|----------------------------2-2-2-2| <---- that part
 C|--0-1-2-1-0-1-2-0-1-2-0-0-0--------|

then the drums start in.... you play...

eb|------------------------------------|
Bb|------------------------------------|
Gb|------------------------------------|
Db|----------------------------2-2-2-2-| repeat twice but on 3rd time play..
Ab|----1-2-1---1-2-0-1-2-------2-2-2-2-|
 C|--0-1-2-1-0-1-2-0-1-2-0-0-0---------|

eb|------------------------------------------------|
Bb|------------------------------------------------|
Gb|------------------------------------------------|
Db|------------------------------------------------| do that once then play the 
Ab|----1-2-1---2-1---2-1---2-1---2-1-------2-2-2-2-| riff above 3 more times 
 C|--0-1-2-1-0-2-1-0-2-1-0-2-1-0-2-1-0-0-0---------| then this one again once..

I dont know how to do the clean tone but maybe i will figure it out and send
it in to u guys... thanks for lookin at my tab....