Teenagers Tab

I've had the black parade for almost a week now, and can't help but notice that 
hasn't been tabbed yet.  So heres my shot at the intro/verse.

I've taught myself how to play and haven't been playing for very long, and this is my 
tab, but tell me what you think.

Thanks, MCR rocks.

		    "Teenagers" - My Chemical Romance

Tabbed by: xIm_a_Pansyx
Email: Mcarnero@cfl.rr.com
Tuning: Standard

Intro
note - Intro (2nd time) is also the verse

Guitar 1
e|--------------------------------------------------------------------|
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------|
G|-----------------9--------------------------------------------------|
D|-----------------9-x2--------------------------11-------------------|
A|-7-7----7--------7------7-7-7-7-7-7-7-7-9-9-11-9--9-11-9------------|
E|-----10-----7-10----------------------------------------------------|
 pm...............        .......................

 They're gonna clean      to make a citizen out of you
 up your looks, with
 all the lies in the
 books,
                                                      1st ending
e|----------------------------------------------------|-----------------|
B|----------------------------------------------------|-----------------|
G|--------------9------------------9------------------|---------------9-|
D|--------------9------------------9------------------|---------------9-| x2
A|--------------7---7-7----7-------7------------------|-7-7---7-------7-|
E|-5-5-5-5--5-7---------10----7-10----7-7-7-7-7-7-7-7-|-----10---7-10---|
 pm............     ..............    ................................

because they sleep with a gun,      so they can watch
and keep an eye on you son          all the things you do

                                                         2nd ending
                                                     e|-----------------|
                                                     B|-----9-----------|
                                                     G|------11-9-------|
                                                     D|-9h11------------| x2
                                                     A|-----------------|
                                                     E|-----------------|

Guitar 2
come in after 1st guitar plays intro, .
e|--------------------------------------------------------------------|
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------|
G|--------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|--------------------------------------------------------------------|
A|7-7-7-7-----x2----------------------7-7-7-7-11-11-11-11-9-9-11-9----|
E|--------------------------------------------------------------------|
 pm................................................................

Because the drugs never work,       cuz they got methods of keeping you
They're gonna give you a smirk,     clean

e|--------------------------------------------------------------------|
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------|
G|--------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|--------------------------------------------------------------------|
A|12-12-12-12--12-11-9-9--11-7--7-7-7-6-6-7-7-9-11-9-7----------------|
E|--------------------------------------------------------------------|
 pm...................................................

They're gonna rip         your aspirations to shreds,
up your head,             another cog in the murder machine


| /  slide up
| \  slide down
| h  hammer-on
| p  pull-off
| ~  vibrato
| +  harmonic
| x  Mute note
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