Forever Bass Tab

This is my first tab and it sounds correct to me so if its not please let me know.

Intro/Verse
0:00                                                 In the brightest hour...
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Chorus  0:55
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Verse X1

Chorus X1

2:26
One last kiss...
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Chorus X1

Outro 3:45
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