Calm Like A Bomb Bass Tab

This is my first tab and I think its pretty much acurate except I'm miss the 3rd fill.

Intro
G|-----0-2-----------0-0---------------|
D|-2-4-----4-2-0-2-4-----2-0-----0-2-4-|
A|---------------------------4-0-------|
E|-------------------------------------|

G|--------------------------------------------|
D|-0-------0-2-2------------0-----2---0-4-0-2-|
A|---4-2-4-------4-2-1----2---2-4---4---------|
E|---------------------2----------------------|

G|-----0-2-----------0-0----------|
D|-2-4-----4-2-0-2-4-----2-0------|
A|---------------------------4--0-|
E|--------------------------------|

Main Verse
G|----------/7-|
D|----9-7-9----|
A|-------------| X(8)
E|-/7----------|

Fill 1
G|------------------------|
D|----9-7-9--9-7-9--9-7-9-|
A|------------------------| X4
E|-/7---------------------|

Main Verse
G|----------/7-|
D|----9-7-9----|
A|-------------| X(4)
E|-/7----------|

Fill 2
G|-----|                G|---------------7-|
D|-----|                D|-7-9-7-9-7-9-9---|
A|-----| play first     A|-----------------| X(4)
E|-7-7-| time only      G|-----------------|

Chorus
G|-------7----|           G|-------7---------|
D|-7-9-9---9--|           D|-7-9-9---9-7---7-|
A|------------| X2  then  A|-------------9---|  play that all together
E|------------|           E|-----------------|  a 2 times

Main Verse
G|----------/7-|
D|----9-7-9----|
A|-------------| X(4)
E|-/7----------|

Fill 1
G|------------------------|
D|----9-7-9--9-7-9--9-7-9-|
A|------------------------| X4
E|-/7---------------------|

Main Verse
G|----------/7-|
D|----9-7-9----|
A|-------------| X(4)
E|-/7----------|

Chorus
G|-------7----|           G|-------7---------|
D|-7-9-9---9--|           D|-7-9-9---9-7---7-|
A|------------| X2  then  A|-------------9---|  play that all together
E|------------|           E|-----------------|  a 4 times

Fill 3
G|---------9-7-9-|
D|-9-9-9-9-------|
A|---------------| X(4)
E|---------------|

Main Verse
G|----------/7-|
D|----9-7-9----|
A|-------------| X(8)
E|-/7----------|

Chorus
G|-------7----|           G|-------7---------|
D|-7-9-9---9--|           D|-7-9-9---9-7---7-|
A|------------| X2  then  A|-------------9---|  play that all together
E|------------|           E|-----------------|  a 4 times

The only part I'm unsure about is fill 3 and I might have gotten the amount of times
a section is played wrong, but other than that i think its flawless.  Can I get some
ratings on my first tab?
   -Picks r4 Dicks-