Beautiful Girls Bass Tab

so i was looking around for these tabs online and no one seemed to have them.
so i fooled around a little and made these. im pretty sure theyre in the right pitch, 
i havent tryed to play them along with the song yet so im not sure.

***the octive higher version sounds much more better than the lower one, but choose 
you care for better.***

heres the octive higher version
STANDARD TUNING
G:----------------------------------------------------------------|I
D:5-5--0-4-5-5--5-4-2-2---0-2-2--2-0-----2-0-0--0-4-5-5--0-4-5-5--|I
A:----------------------2------------3-3--------------------------|I
E:----------------------------------------------------------------|I

heres the lower version
TUNE E DOWN TO B
G:---------------------------------------------------------------------|I
D:---------------------------------------------------------------------|I
A:---------------------------------------------------------------------|I
B:7-7--2-6-7-7--7-6-4-4--0-2-4-4--4-2-0-0--0-4-2-2--2-6-7-7--2-6-7-7---|I

if you have any changes or comments about this tabs feel free to email me at 
thanks.