Hard Slammin Tab

hey this is my first tab so it's only rough.
I think this is roughly right, the chords are but i'm not sure if the rhythm is exactly 
just play around and see what works best!

Drop C Tuning : C-G-C-F-A-D


Intro :


D|-------------------|       D|----------------|         -|
A|-------------------|       A| ---------------|          |
F|-------------------|       F|----------------|          |
C|---3--5--1---10p8--|  X3   C|--3--0-0--3--0--|          |
G|---3--5--1---10p8--|       G|--3--0-0--3--0--|          |
C|---3--5--1---10p8--|       C|--3--0-0--3--0--|          |
                                                          | whole phrase X2
                                                          |
D|-------------------|       D|----------------|          |
A|-------------------|       A| ---------------|          |
F|-------------------|       F|----------------|          |
C|---3--5--1---10p8--|  X3   C|---3h5p3--------|          |
G|---3--5--1---10p8--|       G|---------3------|          |
C|---3--5--1---10p8--|       C|-----------1h3--|         -|


Verse :


D|-------------------|       D|---------|                -|
A|-------------------|       A|---------|                 |
F|-------------------|       F|---------|                 |
C|---3--5--1---10p8--|       C|---3--0--|                 |
G|---3--5--1---10p8--|       G|---3--0--|                 |
C|---3--5--1---10p8--|       C|---3--0--|                 |
                                                          |  whole phrase X4
                                                          |
D|-------------------|       D|------------------|        |
A|-------------------|       A|------------------|        |
F|-------------------|       F|------------------|        |
C|---3--5--1---10p8--|       C|--8-8-8/10-10-10--|        |
G|---3--5--1---10p8--|       G|--8-8-8/10-10-10--|        |
C|---3--5--1---10p8--|       C|--8-8-8/10-10-10--|       -|
                           |--Don't Play 4th time--|

Chorus :


D|-------------------------------------------------------------|      -|
A|-------------------------------------------------------------|       |
F|-------------------------------------------------------------|       |
C|--5-5-5-5-5-8-8-8-8-8-8-12-12-12-12-12-12-12-10-10-10-8-8-8--|       |
G|--5-5-5-5-5-8-8-8-8-8-8-12-12-12-12-12-12-12-10-10-10-8-8-8--|       |
C|--5-5-5-5-5-8-8-8-8-8-8-12-12-12-12-12-12-12-10-10-10-8-8-8--|       |
                                                                       | X2
                                                                       |
D|----------------------------------------------------------------|    |
A|----------------------------------------------------------------|    |
F|----------------------------------------------------------------|    |
C|--5-5-5-5-5-8-8-8-8-8-8-12-12-12-12-12-12-12-12-12-12-12-12-12--|    |
G|--5-5-5-5-5-8-8-8-8-8-8-12-12-12-12-12-12-12-12-12-12-12-12-12--|    |
C|--5-5-5-5-5-8-8-8-8-8-8-12-12-12-12-12-12-12-12-12-12-12-12-12--|   -|


Bridge :

D|------|
A|------|
F|------|
C|--3~--|
G|--3~--|
C|--3~--|


D|------------------------------------------| -|
A|------------------------------------------|  |
F|------------------------------------------|  |
C|-------3-3-3--3-3-3---3-3-3--3-3-9-9-7-7--|  |
G|-------3-3-3--3-3-3---3-3-3--3-3-9-9-7-7--|  |
C|-------3-3-3--3-3-3---3-3-3--3-3-9-9-7-7--|  |
                                               | X4
D|------------------------------------------|  |
A|------------------------------------------|  |
F|------------------------------------------|  |
C|-------0-0-0--0-0-0---0-0-0--0-0-8-8-6-6--|  |
G|-------0-0-0--0-0-0---0-0-0--0-0-8-8-6-6--|  |
C|-------0-0-0--0-0-0---0-0-0--0-0-8-8-6-6--| -|


D|-----------|
A|-----------|
F|-----------|
C|--5--3--0--|
G|--5--3--0--|
C|--5--3--0--|


Intro
Verse
Chorus
Verse
Chorus
Bridge
Chorus X2
Intro (outro/ in slightly different order)

Hope this sounds gd and works. cheers, please leave comments! =]