Follow Me Tab

This is my first tab, so let me know if you think it sounds right..... 

Tuned:
        H H
|E|----3-5-3\1----1----------|-----3---3/5----------
|A|-------------3----3\1-----|----------------------
|D|-----------------------2--|----------------------
|G|--------------------------|----------------------
|B|--------------------------|----------------------
|e|--------------------------|----------------------


        H H
|E|----3-5-3\1----1----------|-----1/3----1---------
|A|-------------3----3\1-----|----------------------
|D|-----------------------2--|----------------------
|G|--------------------------|----------------------
|B|--------------------------|----------------------
|e|--------------------------|----------------------