#2
Meh, very boring.
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#3
Tbh, I would sell this as well...for pocket change.

Not saying that to be a dick either. It just dragged. A lot.
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#4
As a whole, it wasn't a great song, it lacked direction and dragged on.

To me, it sounds like it could be broken up into like 8 separate songs that would have been perfectly fitting for Final Fantasy 7, which is awesome.

It's too bad games have drifted from this sort of music these days.
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#6
honestly I'm not very into this song. Even though it was like 2 to 3 minutes long I was waiting for it to be over half way through lbecause it was so anticlimatic. Also, stop trying to be different by using obscure time signitures;this songt may not be as generic as other songs but that doesn't make it better. So many bands nowadays try to be as creative and unique as possible when creating music but end up sounding retarded. This song didn't sound that retarded or anything but it sure as hell didn't sound "amazing."

And what does "Teardrops of the Wind" mean anyway?
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#7
ahhh mahhh gawwwwwd it was the most amazing song ive ever heard EVAR!!!!!!
Last edited by amonamarthmetal at May 29, 2011,
#8
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ahhh mahhh gawwwwwd it was the most amazing song ive ever heard EVAR!!!!!!

+1 szly brah it wz only missin a dethcoar tritone brekdown and sum pigsquealed voclz abaut the pain of menstruation, if u addd dat bro it youl'd sound sickz beatz yo

EDIT: Also, the beginning of 45: Guitar Pro jingle much?
EDIT2: Specially the ending, argh now I must close GP5 and open it again so i can hear the gingle. Oh yeah.
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Last edited by Ometh at May 29, 2011,
#10
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can i but it for $Texas?


also i made it even moar awesomez. i think it needs more cowbell though

I lol'd so ****ing hard

EDIT: decided to improve it a little further
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#11
It's alright, it's palatable, but doesn't really have any memorable parts, or interesting development or musical ideas. It just continued existing in the background for a while. After listening, I don't really remember anything from it. I mean, it's not disgustingly horrible, you clearly have some idea how to write music, but since you overconfidently described it as "amazing" I don't think you're holding yourself to a high enough standard.
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#12
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I lol'd so ****ing hard

EDIT: decided to improve it a little further


phucking master piece

also at whale pudding, you make a really good point, after i listen to it i couldnt remember what it sounded like 5 minutes afterwards.
#13
@ aam/Ometh:

Well done. Hilariously amazing.

At OP: Boring. That's all there is to it. The makings of a good beginning or interlude or ending are in there somewhere. But as its duller than hell.
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#14
Here's a serious edit with some things that I think help make it a little more interesting/memorable. Still feels like it drags though. Like I said, I imagine this working better broken up into a few looping songs for games. *shrug*
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#15
That was pretty amazing, but I don't know if I have $Texas on me right now, think you could accept an exchange? I have estimated this song to be roughly of equal value. Any man with the real heart of a salesman could never refuse this deal.
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#17
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That was pretty amazing, but I don't know if I have $Texas on me right now, think you could accept an exchange? I have estimated this song to be roughly of equal value. Any man with the real heart of a salesman could never refuse this deal.


I seriously think this has potential, I quite like it. Keep working on it!
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#18
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seriously who would like to buy this song?


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#19
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I seriously think this has potential, I quite like it. Keep working on it!


Ahahaha, really? Thanks I guess, but that's a joke song I wrote in like 20 minutes a year ago or so.
#22
This song is a chore to listen to. Sorry.
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#23
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That was pretty amazing, but I don't know if I have $Texas on me right now, think you could accept an exchange? I have estimated this song to be roughly of equal value. Any man with the real heart of a salesman could never refuse this deal.

Oh man, second huge lol coming from this thread. This is gold right here
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#27
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That was pretty amazing, but I don't know if I have $Texas on me right now, think you could accept an exchange? I have estimated this song to be roughly of equal value. Any man with the real heart of a salesman could never refuse this deal.

Jesus Christ
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#28
THanks for bumping this ometh, it gave me a good laugh and some nostalgia lol
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#29
Ometh noise, yay <3
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