#1
Hey guys, been a while since I posted in this forum.

Just finished recording a completely impulsive song, I just picked up the guitar and this is what came out.

It's funeral doom (no vocals), so it's probably not gonna appeal to too many people, but anyway. Any comments are appreciated and I will c4c with as much detail as you gave me.

http://www.box.com/s/6p7mpy80s3945nph7aul
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#3
Hey man, I'll just start giving my opinion:
I really liked the intro, could have easily been a intro by a very ominous minded Pelican or something, and then when the heavy guitars kick in I felt like the organ(or strings idk) should be a little more on the background.
About 5 minutes in I started to lose interest, because it stays the same, like, really long... But that might be resolved by adding some vocals or something..
Overall I like the build up and the heavy doom style mixed with the ominous clean parts, but it's too long in my opinion.

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=28675598#post28675598
#4
Quote by PanamaJack666
Chorus of Ruin did a song called Windswept.

I like yours, it's very well done!

Haha, I wasn't aware of that. Thanks though

Quote by r0derik1990
Hey man, I'll just start giving my opinion:
I really liked the intro, could have easily been a intro by a very ominous minded Pelican or something, and then when the heavy guitars kick in I felt like the organ(or strings idk) should be a little more on the background.
About 5 minutes in I started to lose interest, because it stays the same, like, really long... But that might be resolved by adding some vocals or something..
Overall I like the build up and the heavy doom style mixed with the ominous clean parts, but it's too long in my opinion.

Thanks for the input! I love Pelican so that's a big compliment there.

It probably is quite long, I do mean for it to have vocals so I'm hoping that will make it more listenable for the entire length of the song.
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