#1
A censer scents an empty alleyway

its musk in the shadow of gasoline

burning the air to some degree


mercury runs free on the walls

like the muathins' voices embracing

the fifty-something-old edifice

but never together, always


a second


apart


There is no peace in the East,

only the censer and the adhan:

a song of fumes and God.
She was born in 1898 in a barn. She died on the thirty-seventh floor of a skyscraper. She's an astronaut.
Last edited by ali.guitarkid7 at Sep 15, 2012,
#2
Grats, solid peace. But, I have never seen them called the "muathin" before. Nor, can I find info on the use of that word. Thought it was the Muadhin. Care to elaborate?
マリ「しあわっせはーあるいってこないだーからあるいってゆっくんだねーん 
いっちにっちいっぽみーかでさんぽ
 さーんぽすすんでにっほさっがるー 
じーんせいはっわんつー!ぱんち・・・


"Success is as dangerous as failure. Hope is as hollow as fear." - from Tao Te Ching

#3
Thanks, and it just depends on the accent. Technically where I'm from, it's pronounced 'Muazin' but I went with the more formal pronunciation.

EDIT: Actually ignore that part, that's wrong
She was born in 1898 in a barn. She died on the thirty-seventh floor of a skyscraper. She's an astronaut.
Last edited by ali.guitarkid7 at Sep 18, 2012,
#5
Thank you I'm glad I finally got one of these
She was born in 1898 in a barn. She died on the thirty-seventh floor of a skyscraper. She's an astronaut.
#8
Did an adbot just call my piece 'all over the place'?


My foot shall make contact with yr arse swiftly and with such brute force that your merchandise will implode due to the sheer pressure.

oh and *reported*
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#9
keep it up!
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