amonamarthmetal
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#1
Well, another WIP that may never get finished... Made in TuxGuitar.
Attachments:
trancey.gp5
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#2
You mispelled arpeggios in your sig.

AHA I MADE YOU HOPE FOR AN ACTUAL CONSTRUCTIVE CRIT.
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amonamarthmetal
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You mispelled arpeggios in your sig.

AHA I MADE YOU HOPE FOR AN ACTUAL CONSTRUCTIVE CRIT.

When I see Ometh is the last to comment, I dont hope for much
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Megasphats skrillxbeatz ye boi all dat hash 420 yo dope smoak $$$$ monies b!tch3s skunk'n'weeds shit nigguh.
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Megasphats skrillxbeatz ye boi all dat hash 420 yo dope smoak $$$$ monies b!tch3s skunk'n'weeds shit nigguh.



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amonamarthmetal
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#6
Why are you guys only being asshole trolls to me
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Why are you guys only being asshole trolls to me

Because you're ugly, mean, and everyone hates you. Also, your mother is a whore.
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jh8890
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#8
Quote by amonamarthmetal
Well, another WIP that may never get finished... Made in TuxGuitar.

It sounds like a good starting point! It's not my favorite kind of music, but it sounds like it has potential. The bass track seems repetitive, and you can't hear the hand clap track at all. I would keep at this one though man, brainstorm a few different ideas and see if you can piece them together!
SOADisdabest
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#9
Wow, this whole forum is really just turning into one big troll fest. Anyway I really liked what you wrote but the percussion sort of got old after a while. It was really well written and I suppose since it's trance it's supposed to be quite repetitive but I think some variations would be good. Same goes for the bass, I'm not usually a fan of that sort of thing on bass. Anyway I edited it so you could see the sort of direction I think you should take with it.
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Trancey edit.gp5
amonamarthmetal
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#10
Quote by SOADisdabest
Wow, this whole forum is really just turning into one big troll fest. Anyway I really liked what you wrote but the percussion sort of got old after a while. It was really well written and I suppose since it's trance it's supposed to be quite repetitive but I think some variations would be good. Same goes for the bass, I'm not usually a fan of that sort of thing on bass. Anyway I edited it so you could see the sort of direction I think you should take with it.

Get ready for Ometh sueing your ass
Gear:
Dean RC7X (Bareknuckle Coldsweat pickups)
Ibanez Rg2570Z (Bareknuckle Juggernaughts)
Schecter KM-6
Schecter Hellraiser Hybrid 7 String
Engl Powerball II
Orange PPC412
Line 6 Pod HD500X
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#11
Quote by SOADisdabest
Wow, this whole forum is really just turning into one big troll fest. Anyway I really liked what you wrote but the percussion sort of got old after a while. It was really well written and I suppose since it's trance it's supposed to be quite repetitive but I think some variations would be good. Same goes for the bass, I'm not usually a fan of that sort of thing on bass. Anyway I edited it so you could see the sort of direction I think you should take with it.





Mother of god. I actually though that was a serious edit. I totally lost my shit when the drums started.
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amonamarthmetal
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#12
Quote by SOADisdabest
Wow, this whole forum is really just turning into one big troll fest. Anyway I really liked what you wrote but the percussion sort of got old after a while. It was really well written and I suppose since it's trance it's supposed to be quite repetitive but I think some variations would be good. Same goes for the bass, I'm not usually a fan of that sort of thing on bass. Anyway I edited it so you could see the sort of direction I think you should take with it.

Why would you comment on the troll fest and then jump on the band wagon? It's pretty rude to do shit like that.
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Dean RC7X (Bareknuckle Coldsweat pickups)
Ibanez Rg2570Z (Bareknuckle Juggernaughts)
Schecter KM-6
Schecter Hellraiser Hybrid 7 String
Engl Powerball II
Orange PPC412
Line 6 Pod HD500X
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#13
If you really wanna collab let's do something like this lol.
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amonamarthmetal
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#14
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If you really wanna collab let's do something like this lol.

We could try.
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Dean RC7X (Bareknuckle Coldsweat pickups)
Ibanez Rg2570Z (Bareknuckle Juggernaughts)
Schecter KM-6
Schecter Hellraiser Hybrid 7 String
Engl Powerball II
Orange PPC412
Line 6 Pod HD500X
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#15
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We could try.

Yay!
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