#1
Sitting
In my room
Just bitching
What can I do
It's cold
Outside
I'm confined
It's true
Haven't got a car
Parked and no I
Don't drive
It's cold outside
Can't afford
To go out
Plus I look Bruck too
Gotta clean up
That's what I'm
Gonna do
You don't need money
All you need
Is you
Last edited by treborillusion at Nov 14, 2012,
#2
there's one verse. now write another four.
rhyme structure needs room for complexity to develop within the poem, so have fun with it.
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#3
Hi, I usually don’t post comments. But, I had to say this was a really good post.great, agree with your idea!