In my room
Just bitching
What can I do
It's cold
I'm confined
It's true
Haven't got a car
Parked and no I
Don't drive
It's cold outside
Can't afford
To go out
Plus I look Bruck too
Gotta clean up
That's what I'm
Gonna do
You don't need money
All you need
Is you
Last edited by treborillusion at Nov 14, 2012,
there's one verse. now write another four.
rhyme structure needs room for complexity to develop within the poem, so have fun with it.
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