treborillusion
UG Fanatic
Join date: May 2009
3,115 IQ
#1
Sitting
In my room
Just bitching
What can I do
It's cold
Outside
I'm confined
It's true
Haven't got a car
Parked and no I
Don't drive
It's cold outside
Can't afford
To go out
Plus I look Bruck too
Gotta clean up
That's what I'm
Gonna do
You don't need money
All you need
Is you
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look nigga, if you're chillin with 5 bros and 2 hos, you're gonna wanna pay attention to all of em equally. not moon over the hos forever and laugh at every shitty thing they say and just stare at them all night, like some of my mates do.
Last edited by treborillusion at Nov 14, 2012,
vintage x metal
Brown-Thighed Girl
Join date: Sep 2006
5,308 IQ
#2
there's one verse. now write another four.
rhyme structure needs room for complexity to develop within the poem, so have fun with it.
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it's official, vintage x metal is the saving grace of this board and/or the antichrist




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lillianyang
Banned
Join date: Oct 2012
10 IQ
#3
Hi, I usually don’t post comments. But, I had to say this was a really good post.great, agree with your idea!