#1
Hi guys, i need your help to comment on my singing technique...

Please don't mind with my pronounciation..I just want you guys to let me know if have made a mistake anywhere or using the wrong technique..
I hope you guys can comment me on anything..

Here is sample number 1 where i sing more relax and a little bit breathy..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ViYun5dEeJQ


and here is sample number 2 where i try give my voice a little deeper even in high note..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nG2ArIm-BKA


You guys can either choose which one is more comfortable with people ears or you can just tell me something negative..I will openly hear them out...
#3
Does my singing really bad..I really need to know this...
It's okay if you are little bit honest to me..^^
#4
I didn't understand a word of what you just sung. It is kinda alright, the breathing is ok but you mumble as if you were trying not to be heard by others. Sing a bit louder, pronounce the words clearer and take lessons.
ich bin indeed ein sprechender panda, how are you?
Music student, Jazz/Classical/Prog
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#5
I'll be honest here. It's not the best I've heard. Far from it. Get lessons, and you'll be surprised how much you improve.

Sorry, but I figure I'd be straight up and hurt your feelings than lie to you to soften the blow. Improve on it man, and you should be alright.

Take into account I also paused dream theater for you, so that wasn't probably the best comedown.
#6
I understand..Thanks you guys..but what i want to focus more is my tone..Does my tone and resonance sounds okay??..I know about my pronounciation..but what about my tone, does it really suck?
#7
Quote by Spaztikko
Take into account I also paused dream theater for you, so that wasn't probably the best comedown.


Same situation here. Sorry for being straight-forward, TS.
ich bin indeed ein sprechender panda, how are you?
Music student, Jazz/Classical/Prog
Music Man JP6 BFR, Ibanez S7420, Fender American Standard, Ibanez EW35 acoustic, 6505+
#8
Thanks for being honest guys..i understand..This thread is closed..^^
#9
It's not, but yeah. Good luck man.

Also, wait for others opinions. More will have better advice who actually sing, rather than my " It's way too late so say the first thing that comes to mind" thing

EDIT: OK pull the video then, but realise that there are people on here who could actually maaybe probably help you.
#10
Get lessons, and you'll be surprised how much you improve.

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This.