NOTAFOX
Registered User
Join date: Mar 2009
795 IQ
#1
Kind of a grungy hard rock song. Sounds like a seather or stained song in my head

Verse

This cycle that we go through every day
It doesnt seem to end in any way
And though it never ends i see right through
Because this never endingness begins with you

As days begin to end and fade away
Our once peaceful song ceases to play
I ask myself again what should I do?
I ask myself again why im with you

Chorus

Its cuz I feel the hope that you one day
Will let go of your pain
Its cuz I know that your trying
Todays another day

Though you feel empty and worthless
Ill tell you its not true
So please stay strong now, for both of us
You've got nothing to prove

Verse

On wings of wax you fly high in the sky
With dreams of happiness passing you by
Though it may seem to you that im far away
But in reality its by you that ill stay

Constantly your asking yourself why
Hundrands if not thousands of times tried
These plans of such success in your mind play
Ill make sure that they do happen someday

Chorus

Bridge

Cuz todays another day
Ya todays another day
Just another day
One day

Chorus x2
There is a saying in poetry, "show me, don't tell me." here you are announcing everything, like an announcer to a sporting event. "Dave has the ball. Dave passes the ball. Dave picks his ass."

~Zanascross

XD epic win
BjarnedeGraaf
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Join date: May 2012
2,750 IQ
#2
not too sure about the Chorus 2x at the end, but other than that its a good old rocksong
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Epiphone Goth G-400 SG
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NOTAFOX
Registered User
Join date: Mar 2009
795 IQ
#3
Ya I couldn't really think of anything special to do at the end lol so then goes in the good old x2 chorus lol
There is a saying in poetry, "show me, don't tell me." here you are announcing everything, like an announcer to a sporting event. "Dave has the ball. Dave passes the ball. Dave picks his ass."

~Zanascross

XD epic win
BjarnedeGraaf
UG's bear
Join date: May 2012
2,750 IQ
#4
Quote by NOTAFOX
Ya I couldn't really think of anything special to do at the end lol so then goes in the good old x2 chorus lol


You could do something cliché like repeat the last sentance of the chorus twice.

You've got nothing to prove,

No, you got nothing to prove.

and then finish with a instrumental bang :P
My Soundcloud

My beginner rig:

Epiphone Goth G-400 SG
Line 6 Spider IV (Don't judge me, I was young and stupid)
Stagg SW203N
Yamaha APX500